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For a short video (and a FREE one, at that), I'd give it 3 out of 5.

Wren is certainly an attractive young lady, but not as talented an actress as one could wish for.

The first gentleman came across just as he was supposed to: as being quite the prick. The brother, on the other hand, didn't sell his part quite as well.

The both of them suddenly having their clothes on again was a bit jarring, but youtube being what it is (not to mention the modesty of the cast), it's easy to understand why it might have been done that way. I suppose we just get too used to the genre being tied in with porn all the time, heh.

All in all, it wasn't half bad. It'd be willing to bet that, with a little more practice, all the shortcoming I mentioned could be improved on substantially.

Thank you for sharing this with us, Miss Mako, and my thanks to Wren Adams for taking part!