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Re: Under The General's Command (Work in Progress)
So far I'm intrigued to see what kind of changes are going to happen, since apparently Ferris is losing hair...is his female self bald or is it going to be replaced by a different set of hair?
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Originally Posted by Rubilax
Half a dozen identical pairs of knee-high black boots sat patiently underneath just as many pairs of black parachute pants that billowy, navy blue coats, similar to the ones upstairs that hung from the top of the cabinet.
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Do you mean the parachute pants billowed at the cuff, or the navy blue coats were billowing?
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"Fuck!" He spat as his search proved fruitless, "I must've left it in the car." Scowling, he scanned the room as his hair continued to decorate the floor. It only took him couple of second to find what he was looking for, tucked away just out of sight.
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I'm sure you'll clarify later on, but what is the thing he's digging out of his pocket? I'd assume a comb, but that might not be what you're intending.
That's kinda about it, really. Hope this helps.
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-Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel)
-Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).
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