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Re: Mail Order Bride, A new TG story..
So he became the woman from the dating site...then where's "Yuki's" date supposed to be?
Also, during part one...
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Then his cheeks itched he scratched at them and to his surprise he got stubble like he had just shaved.
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I think that needs to be changed to suggest he's losing stubble instead of gaining it.
And in part 5
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Another wave of pain hit as his testatrices entered his body.
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Do you mean testicles?
Otherwise, whilst I found the sequence pretty simple, it's a decent enough tg.
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-Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel)
-Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).
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