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Muhznit · 12-30-2013

Ah. You may want to use "Scene" instead of "Sketch". That's what they usually do on The Overflowing Bra.

For a first story, I say its pretty good. In fact, I did you the favor of crossposting it to the mind control/bimbofication thread: http://www.process-productions.com/f...=8563&page=169

You could've elaborated more on the BE aspect though, that's the first thing people in this forum are going to mention. The subset of us that like lactation would correspondingly emphasize the milky shenanigans that accompanied it, especially with Bella and whoever SHE affects.

12-30-2013	#4
Muhznit The Magical Mammary Man Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In my chair. ._. Posts: 1,171	Re: Sketch 03: Temptation [Story / Bimbofication / BE] Ah. You may want to use "Scene" instead of "Sketch". That's what they usually do on The Overflowing Bra. For a first story, I say its pretty good. In fact, I did you the favor of crossposting it to the mind control/bimbofication thread: http://www.process-productions.com/f...=8563&page=169 You could've elaborated more on the BE aspect though, that's the first thing people in this forum are going to mention. The subset of us that like lactation would correspondingly emphasize the milky shenanigans that accompanied it, especially with Bella and whoever SHE affects. __________________ I love 'em.