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Re: Shifting [TF / Werewolves]
I'm not a fan of werewolves, but I got into this knowing that you've an impressive writing style. Analyzing your and many other (of the vast majority) werewolf stories, I just found one aspect of the process I continue to obviate in my own productions. The auditory cues.
Fragments like: "his bones cracked" or "muscles boomed larger" go towards illustrating the transformation in a wholly audiovisual medium that the reader can reconstruct with even the most basic of imaginations.
It's so simple, yet at some point my own mind must've decided it was too obvious and made me too half-assed to even consider adding these.
Hey Lycan, thanks for writing with the level of skill you do. I'm pretty sure I'll be able to write better transformation now that I've found more things to implement to my narrative.
On a less ysosrsm8 note, gotta love dem halloween themes. The mention of the sexy bee costume at the start remined me of my Queen Bee girl from one of my own stories. I wonder if you've considered working with insects before?
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