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Unread 03-14-2014   #2
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Re: Bitten: The Series

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Originally Posted by Kantomaster1111 View Post
I like the second transformation for two reasons: the first is the inclusion of a tail (thank John Fawcett for that one).

The second reason is that we now know what Elena avoided, and another clue as to why she may be a special case (aided by the fact that she is the only werewolf to ever suppress the change). The story would be finally starting to move somewhere, if only the rest of the writing was stronger.
My biggest problem is that they really didn't make enough of a deal of her first change. It was kinda like "Ow, this hurts", "Deal with it, or you'll die", "Ow again", and it was over. I have no idea how the book described it, but the scene (ignoring the tf parts, talking strictly storywise) was underwhelming to be depicting something that was so dangerous to Elena.
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