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Originally Posted by frice2000
It is pretty rough as there are lots of spelling and word choice errors. And those two aren't my favorite ones of your characters at all. But it'll be interesting to see anything new from you.
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In his defense he self edits well but when drafting his spelling grammar are beyond bad. He is just sharing at a much earlier point publically than he usually does.
Character choice is due to the request from a third party, not myself.
I need to read the first story before I can read and offer comments on this though. I am a bad friend. :/