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monkat · 06-18-2014

Hi Aiko.

The story so far seems a little bit flat. Starting a story with blunt physical descriptions is weird. "She was short, hand brown hair, etc."

Not something I'd pay $10 for.

Mais si tu veux l'offrir à la communauté anglophone, je peux servir comme traducteur.

06-18-2014	#1
monkat Frequent Poster Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 132	Re: Arnaud, petit à petit (French Story) Hi Aiko. The story so far seems a little bit flat. Starting a story with blunt physical descriptions is weird. "She was short, hand brown hair, etc." Not something I'd pay $10 for. Mais si tu veux l'offrir à la communauté anglophone, je peux servir comme traducteur.