Re: TG/BE Story: A Friendly Game
Fantastic.
Just really, really, perfect.
And although I'd like to see more, I think this was the perfect length. Instead of adding more to this one I'd rather you do sequels and continue on with different adventures of Julie.
And although I think TG fits this character best you've given yourself the ability to do shrinking, animals, or inanimate transformations in the future. Would be fun to see some of those appear occasionally.
Hope to see more, you've got a great eye for detail and describe everything just perfectly!
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