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Unread 06-28-2014   #2
LK
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Re: Story: Please.. NSFW

I thought this was an excellent read. I liked the intensity, and the premise was pretty sound. It ended on just the right note.

The spasms were a bit repetitive -- that's about my only issue with it. But when they were most impactful, such as the french kiss, that was great.
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