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frice2000 · 09-27-2014

Quite enjoyed the mental change. The physical change wasn't my favorite part as the focus lingered a bit too long on certain areas. In general though very nice story. Do prefer the ending where she basically kills the guy though. Much more horror there and I think it fit the rest of the piece better then the sex out of nowhere.

09-27-2014	#2
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Unclean [TF / FM / Wererat] Quite enjoyed the mental change. The physical change wasn't my favorite part as the focus lingered a bit too long on certain areas. In general though very nice story. Do prefer the ending where she basically kills the guy though. Much more horror there and I think it fit the rest of the piece better then the sex out of nowhere.