@frice2000 - thanks! I actually wrote the sex scene as part of the main story (out of, umm, habit
) but then realized fairly quickly that it didn't make sense. She wasn't turned into an actual wererat (not in the infected sense) and it's supposed to be more of a "you're a shitty person, have a taste of it" as a personal punishment that reduces her down to terrible base needs. Still, left in the sex stuff for people that like it.
@blackshirtboy - thanks! I hope you caught chapter 2 of 'Stay', too. I, uhh, don't plan to keeping up with a pace like this, though. That's a fast way to run out of ideas and drop to posting crappy things.
@mysteryman29 - thank you! I'll take the compliment of 'one of the best rat stories' with only a *touch* of guilt. Mostly because I conceived of it and wrote it in literally 3 hours. I'd just finished editing Stay chapter 2. With that one, the man character loses intelligence with her change and I thought how much more enjoyable it'd be to write an asshole character having the same thing happen - much more satisfying. So, I did a quick browse through of animal types, saw rat and just kinda started writing. Things unfolded from there. It's not my best writing from a grammatical sense due to the quick writing and lack of tons of editing. It almost went in as a 'Sketch' project due to that. Lots of re-used words and narrative skips. So, yay for still being enjoyable!