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Originally Posted by Ilovebe
Hey All,
I'm currently drafting up a commission script and I just wanted to get your philosophy on a particular trope. There will be a TF/TG aspect in one part of the story. Specifically, there will be two females who go through a forced transformation. One of the females will however transform into the male version of the species. Then the new male takes the female sexually.
My question concerns order in the instance that each person is TFed at a time. Do you prefer that the non-TG person transform first or the TG to happen first? I can see story telling points with either way. With the former, the first person can transform, and the other must deal with the new sexual urges as they begin transforming into a horny beast. With regard to the latter, there is the psychological aspect in which the future TF realizes that not only is she going to lose her humanity, but she's probably not going to be keeping her chastity intact either.
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Unless you plan on just skipping describing the second transformation entirely, I'd have the non-tg go first. That way you can skim over the second woman's change, until it starts deviating from the first - that is, until the gender-change starts taking effect. We've already seen the species change, so you don't need to describe it as intimately the second time, but you can still add new material via the gender change.
If you do it the other way around, well, there's little reason to describe the second change at all. We'd already seen everything you're going to do, after all. By making it TF, then TGTF, you add a little something to the story with each victim's change.