AgraRipe by Limerick is out. It's another Limerick epic, so happy fapping!
I do have a few comments, though. I was surprised to see the name 'Erin' used here, given Erin was the name of the lead in
Backwash. Nevertheless, it is only appropriate for the name to be used for the sassy best friend, let alone the token Limerick 'Asian girl'. In fact, Erin was my favorite character, to the point that I was disappointed we didn't see more of her transformation. It would have been a lot of fun to see her remolded from her sardonic self into a more feminine and motherly-type. Erin's the least stereotypical housewife-type of girl in the story, so I think seeing her become the 'cooking and baking type' would have been exciting. Oh, well.
I do like that Myra wound up being the 'brains' of the main cast. Her final comment to Lydia was deliciously poetic, although maybe it could stand to improve from a stronger sense of conflict between the two characters before the grand finale.
You weren't kidding about the gender-bending being light, though. I do find it quite appropriate that the beta males wound up being the ones to become girls. Sometimes playing something straight is just as surprising as being contrary.
These long-form stories of yours are always my favorite. They're long, but also very easy to read through. I think the multiple point of views are your best unsung technique. If your mastery of prose is your number one, your mastery of the extended story arc your second, it is your ability to handle an ensemble that is your well-deserved number three ability.
If I have one real problem with the story it is that you jumped to quickly to using the bimbos and bimbofication. I found it pretty darn early that we were already getting to the breakdown of norms, but perhaps that is simply because Monday is such a short section of the story?
By the way, have you thought about putting out properly formatted PDF files of your stories? It'd be nice for archival purposes.