[Janus Steel]

Being a fan of SW, AR, AP, and Attribute Theft a part of me always loves the DreamTales stories. I look forward to each one that comes out, unless it's GTS cause that's not my thing. And I'm huge into submission and domination if it's written correctly. I don't regret a sense of Zoe being truly being dominate. Just bigger and bitchy.

My hang ups are always story based... like why is nothing happing to the brother!? He got the same flu shots. I understand it's more female driven, but trust me some of is like to see male AP too, if it's because the brother hasn't anyone to compare against I would rebuttal and say Ice Cream guy could be the brothers foil. the boys can switch places too! And think of the dynamic of both younger kids becoming adults and one adult is now a kid... And ice cream man becomes ice cream boy and we have the exciting adventures of ackward family bonding... Or maybe no bonding just make the flu shots affect the brother as well. Sorry, story rant over.

Anyway after godley and I discussed I went through and reread the 3 parts. And I'llsay this because it caught my eye. Madison and Zoe's breasts are just glaringly colored. I thought at first this was just shadow and lighting but upon closer inspection it can be seen when Madisonand Zoe are standing nearly nude in front of their younger brother, sorry but I NEVER was in my underwear when I was around my little brother guess these three are a lot closer than my siblings and I 😜, and again in book three right before the infamous "in puberty"line. It's really glaring there because she has what looks like the beginning of pics bit the coloring also tries to show she has some, albeit small, breasts. And its super noticeable when Zoe grows in the third book.

From my experience doing that Palcomix Akane vs Shampoo story I photo manipulated into a BE/Attribute Theft story it looks like they're the same breasts just cut onto the next person.

I know because I spent a lot of time trying to get skin tones and stuff working when I was moving from panel to panel. Drawing is hard, it's why I write. 😛

That said, thank you DT for giving us process to talk about. I'm awaiting the next part.