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Originally Posted by ederin
I enjoy a good himbo.
To peel back the curtain a bit, making the guy himbo-ize at least somewhat helps from a narrative perspective. Ironically, writing from a more realism perspective makes it necessary to amp up other, unrealistic aspects. First and foremost, I don't care how horny a guy is, there's no way he can handle the demands of a revved up bimboslut, at least not the way I write them. It'd be exhausting. So he needs a sexual booster shot.
Second of all, himboizing the guy goes a long ways towards making him more relatable, strange as that may sound. We're going to be spending a lot of time with Trevor. If he's just a guy who turns his innocent wife into a cock-hungry slut, well, that's kind of a jerk move. Having him share in the confusion and the change makes him less of a sociopath and more a guy who just got in over his head.
I got a bunch of questions along the lines of 'why is TREVOR the one taking a pill that bimboizes his WIFE?' Because drugging your wife for sex is an asshole thing to do! Whereas taking the pill yourself is a lot more like viagra. Plus if he drugs Candace then he also has to drug any other girls he wants to bimboize, which is REALLY socially maladjusted.
So the bottom line is that I really had no choice but to give Trevor a ten inch cock.
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I saw those questions, and I feel like those people missed something very very obvious. Trevor all but expressly states that if she ingests his cum it'll change her. Dunno how they didn't see that.
I do have one qualm, though. You talk about not wanting to make him seem like a jerk/sociopath. That one post, though, where he gives a warning to teenage boys...that one made him sound like a truly horrible person.
I mean, I'm still reading your story. Just sayin'.