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Originally Posted by Ilovebe
Damn, you work fast. *lol* I guess my vote is moot at this point, but I always think rays are fun. As Ivan states, it makes the most realistic sense if the mcguffin is supposed to be a weapon. Also, without waxing a bunch of literary analysis, there's a clear allusion to a gun - and injection to a certain extent - representing a penis that acts upon the transformee.
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Yeah, once I got rolling on it, it just flew out. I think I wrote the whole thing in about 45 minutes. The idea is this is supposed to be a battlefield weapon. Although I'm not sure if it violates the Geneva Convention.
I've actually had several requests for a Part 2. So any ideas?