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Very nice, actually. Like, aside from liking it because it features my favorite thing (fuzzy ladies getting way fuzzier), there's actually a spark here. I'm curious about the characters and what happens next, which is not typical for the usual TF story. Aside from some of the technical stuff that came from writing this very rushed as you said, I felt you left some loose ends. What caused her to transform? Nerves? Excitement over Gabe? If it was meant to be mysterious, I thought it felt more just incomplete. I also thought the conversation between Nora in wolf form and Gabe was hard to follow. I assume Gabe was asking if she had ever killed a human before, but it wasn't obvious. I do appreciate how you tried to not spell everything out for the reader, but just a little more assistance would have been good. I also enjoyed the touch of humor from Gabe's point of view.

I definitely look forward to reading more from you, especially any continuance of this story.