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BillPratt · 12-23-2019

An old man travels back in time to right an old wrong. Expanding breasts result.

40 page comic script. Looking for input on missed opportunities and holes that need filling.

12-23-2019	#1
BillPratt 789th level Draco-Ninja Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: In my home. Posts: 2,047	Looking for test readers. An old man travels back in time to right an old wrong. Expanding breasts result. 40 page comic script. Looking for input on missed opportunities and holes that need filling.