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Abazaba · 10-24-2021

Masterful job, this is one of the best, maybe the best AP video I have seen. If I was going to nit pick two things pop out at me. Firstly being you don't need to narrate the transformation. We are already watching it happen so the male VO is just distracting(at least for me). Maybe female VO or the actual girls narrating how they feel would be nice. Secondly and this is probably more a me thing, is the addition of the male bits at the end. It is at the end so easy to ignore, but still. That aside, amazing simply amazing. Your work gets so much better with each video.

I cannot wait to see your next piece, keep up the stellar work.

10-24-2021	#11
Abazaba Frequent Poster Join Date: May 2005 Location: Long Beach CA Posts: 342	Re: Traditions (Female AP) Masterful job, this is one of the best, maybe the best AP video I have seen. If I was going to nit pick two things pop out at me. Firstly being you don't need to narrate the transformation. We are already watching it happen so the male VO is just distracting(at least for me). Maybe female VO or the actual girls narrating how they feel would be nice. Secondly and this is probably more a me thing, is the addition of the male bits at the end. It is at the end so easy to ignore, but still. That aside, amazing simply amazing. Your work gets so much better with each video. I cannot wait to see your next piece, keep up the stellar work.