Re: My New Shrinking Story: The Cult of Dwindle
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Originally Posted by greenhereact
Very nice follow-up chapter. I loved the scene where Dani gives into her desires. It makes her seem even more vulnerable, like she can't help it, even if she is in front of her friends. She's almost reluctant to admit it, and then feels the need to hide in her enormous clothes. That last part is also a favorite of mine: Lewd things happening inside clothing. It's cute how the fabric rustles with someone (or a couple) being just tiny lumps beneath. And also, being able to enclose oneself completely inside clothes that previously fit them really drives home what they've been reduced to.
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Glad you enjoyed it. And whether you intended it or not the phrase "what they've been reduced to" is actually something I've been playing with. So stay tuned for Part 3
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Cheers!
Bonnie
Currently not using Discord. If you tried to contact me there (Bonzilla25#1005), sorry I never replied. Kind of a hiatus for a bit.
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