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I did like the story, but it lends towards a few logical questions that you might, if you actually cared and weren't just writing a fun grow/shrink story for the heck of it, want to think about.
For example, if these women aren't hidden, then how the heck does the owner of the sideshow not get arrested for kidnapping, at the very least. If he's so nice, and grants the women so much "freedom", what stops them from screaming bloody murder till someone gets the police, or what stops the police from investigating the carnival since it was the last place these women were seen in the first place. Things like that.
For my money, I'm wondering why she's blaming and plotting revenge against her poor, dumb boyfriend rather than the b!tch who just set her up.
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