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Originally Posted by ailovestogrow
I'm curious, I know what I like in my BE, but what do you all prefer? I don't see any of these as wrong answers, but as an author of smut I want to see what others are looking for in their process stories. If my poll doesn't have your special brand of kink...
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I saw this post, and I had to say something, not to do the poll, but to offer a different opinion that might shape your current viewpoint.
Please, do not try and formulate Fetish Fiction Writing; it's not possible. People's kinks are much too diverse and bizarre to quantify.
When I checked out your story on Amazon, I marveled at the number of reviews with thoughtful comments, like 12+. I was stunned. You never get that kind of feedback in this community unless you write something sexy and engaging.
All of the BE I've read on Amazon overflows with Bimbofication. And… most of the time, the plots are Parmesan and Spaghetti: get big, get horny, get to fucking, repeat. There is nothing wrong with this, but I crave something little more substantive between the two main protagonists. (Being a romantic can suck some times in the BE niche).
To answer your question on the specific type/descriptive of BE, I'm going to say, do not worry about it. I'd focus more on the conflict, plot, and growth of your characters (more than just cup sizes). I'm fairly certain there are specific readers that if they see a story with their type of BE, they will read it regardless, but that collective group isn't as big as it used to be.
I'd focus more on taking risks. My example: I'm not too fond of Lactation, I tolerate it at best but often never bother reading anything with the Other Story Attributes: Lactation. But one time, a long time ago, I read a story where these two women were exposed to a Succubus Virus (???), and its symptoms were breast growth and Lactation. I almost bailed, but the mode of transmission was drinking such Lactation. There was a scene where the two women were drinking from each other boobs, each growing larger, then giving the other a turn. They kept doing this until they were massive. It was one of the hottest scenes I had ever read.
The size preference, which I think is the keystone to any BE story, is tricky. I am a massive fan of WOW stories. Any BE story where the female protagonist becomes room-sized or larger and immobile is right in my Wheelhouse. Yet, the story MUST have a growth reversion clause, or this becomes Body Horror to me.
The same goes for revenge porn. If the story's plot is how this super nerd takes revenge on this beautiful woman who wronged him, I'm out.
These stories should be as fun as they are perverted. My all-time favorite story is "Cup Above the Rest" by Clovis.
https://www.overflowingbra.com/download.php?StoryID=167
The reason why I love it and still love reading it is because of the main character, Ally. All she wanted was to experience the thrill of having massive breasts.
(***spoilers***) The climax of the story is she goes to a Big Boob convention with her boyfriend. Each is happily enjoying what Ally is experiencing until she appears at the conference's final judging aspect. Then shock, her other roommate shows up who heard the same magic spell placed on Ally. Then there's a crazy growth competition between the two ladies, with the conclusion almost becoming darkly tragic, but no! Both ladies are rescued by the magically inclined roommate with the selfless courage of Ally's boyfriend.
The story was fun, whimsical, and had the perfect blend of tension that would make you worry about things getting out of control, but it's all going to be just fine.
I've never appreciated realistic stories because reality sucks. Here are some interesting facts:
Each cup size increase is about 150 CC of saline…
There are 3785.41 ccs in one gallon…
If a petite woman goes from 34 B to 34 JJ she would gain approximately 8.5 pounds.
(Math: Going from a B cup to JJ cup[as per the UK bra measurement code] is a 12 cup size increase equal to 1800 cc of the implant, which is 3600cc of saline, which is equivalent to about 8.5 pounds.)
And by my guess is she would look something like this:
In conclusion, I would like to add this: write what you want. Make it fun, make it exciting, and maybe make it a little dark, but never treat your female character as nothing more than a commodity for the 'male gaze.' And ALWAYS put some sex in it.
(What's the point of getting bigger breast if the protagonist doesn't smash them in her love's interest face right before they begin their sexual marathon.)
ALSO, I almost forgot, clothes ripping is a ++++. Its an analogy to stripping. If done well it can be a huge reveal of vulnerability or a massive power play. I can get into this later, but I've meandered on long enough.
But seriously best of luck with your writing. I would love to see any aspect of Transformation Faction get taken seriously on Amazon.