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Originally Posted by Mr_DNA
Great work as usual from Oppaiman, but that story desperately needs some proofreading. Right in the first sentence, champagne is misspelled and erroneously capitalized. Had to close the tab right there and come back to it later.
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Yeah...normally ones at mcstories are better edited than at places like fictionmania, but there are always a few things that slip through (depending on settings...that spelling might not actually get caught). But good eye. Didn't make any changes to the text myself on this one.