Greetings.
It's nice to at least two people coming out of lurking to post.
On to my art style though, like I said previously in this thread, I can easily 'clean up' my drawings so there isn't a whole lot of sketchy lines, but I in fact make them on purpose, because it gives it the unfinished look I feel is in everything I draw. Also, I was thinking of going back and patching up the series later as a color comic, so I'll likely just clean it up then. Also planing on redoing anything that I didn't like and whatnot, but for now I'll stick to trying to finish what I started, and see what I feel like doing later on.
Thanks for the critisism though, nice to see someone stating what they feel instead of cowering from their own fear of being critisised back.