I came to the forums to see if Lobo Leo had posted anything recently (he's vanished again) but since I'm here...
There's now a final, revised version (fixed a lot of outstanding typos) with an actual, original cover drawn by
http://ashkey.deviantart.com/
You still view the greyscale version without the bonus material for free at
http://www.daemoneye.net/novels.html You can also purchase a print copy that includes the bonus material (sketches and author's note) in greyscale or color (due to Lulu's policies regarding pricing, the color version is really expensive). Optionally, if you contribute at least 2.00 USD to the project I'll just email you a pdf of the full color revised edition (with the bonus material).
I've started working on the revised version of Book II. It'll take a while to finish, particularly since I'm going to have to find a replacement for Lobo Leo.
...this probably counts as an ad, so if any mod decides to delete I won't contest it.