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Blackbat · 12-13-2008

4th and 5th paragrapghs were the best for me, didn't like the potienial, "was it a dream? ending" but the rest was very good writing

12-13-2008	#3
Blackbat SW Gentleman Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: UK Posts: 541	Re: Short Story: Ashley Does Laundry 4th and 5th paragrapghs were the best for me, didn't like the potienial, "was it a dream? ending" but the rest was very good writing