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Originally Posted by JBird
At the very least, I want to like the characters who are undergoing the transformations.
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I need to second this.
I'd say focus on writing a good story.
Think about pacing, (in my opinion) thats the most important aspect of Erotica. Paragraphs that are too short hinder a scene's buildup.
A giant block of text that's over 20 lines long is like a brick to the groin.
Best of luck...
But seriously where are people writing BE fiction anymore.