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06-04-2006
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Frequent Poster
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: UK
Posts: 162
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My shot at a TG drawing.
Hi. Thought I'd try and stop lurking and contribute more. Best idea I had was to try a drawing. (TG is my main interest). No process, just the changed-and-clothes-don't-fit idea. I'd appreciate some feedback and suggestions for the future. Thanks.
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06-04-2006
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 454
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It's nice. Process may have been preferable, since that's essentially the theme around here, but I've certainly seen much worse. Keep at it, maybe concentrate on anatomy. Particularly the hands. It's been said by some that to draw good cartoons, all you really need to know is how to draw the head and hands. You might try getting the basics of the realistic face down before tackling more iconic, "manga" styles. She looks just a smidge like her eyes are going in opposite directions. Oh, and I'd have the shadow under her connect with her feet and pants. When shading ends around a character it can indicate separation, like foreground/background. In other words, it looks like she's floating just slightly over the floor. Also, and this is sort of a pet peeve of mine, loose pants wouldn't quite fall that way... they seem like they should be bigger around the knees and/or less wide at the bottom. It's like the character's wearing bell-bottoms. Though I admire your sense of form under the clothing, how the hips are wide enough to make the fabric go taut. Definitely a nice job for the first time.
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Mega-Procrastinator
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Excellent drawing, I agree with Case Scenario though, it could use a little process, even if it's just a "Before" pic to go with your "After" pic. Still, it's quite a good picture. I hope you do more of them!
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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THAT IS FREAKING AWSOME
Very NICE TG, one of the best i have ever seen. (What can i say, i dont like clothes morph)
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06-04-2006
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jun 2005
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Well well, my second post within the same hour, let alone the same month...
Not a bad picture man... Although of course the concept around here is "process" stuff (as many people like to remind every contributer), in my eyes any relevant drawing that's done well is more than welcome. I mean, hey, maybe now you'll go and draw a nice sequence/processy pic for us. ;P Seriously though, keep it up... |
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06-05-2006
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The Tiny Sailor Senshi
Join Date: May 2005
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If this is your first TG drawing then it is definitely excellent for a first. ^_^
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06-05-2006
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Join Date: May 2005
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Reminds me of my first TG drawing. ^^
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Frequent Poster
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: UK
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Thanks very much for all your feedback. I'll be sure to take it onboard when I try something else.
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06-05-2006
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Process Fan
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 60
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I dont know how long u been drawing but its really good. I like to draw myself. so if u need help let me know.
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06-06-2006
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Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2005
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It is very nice, please do continue. ^^
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