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Unread 08-01-2018   #1
Valeyard Vince
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Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

Tiny Talks To Towering - Watch Your Tongue 3 is out now!



An increasingly small and desperate Nat seeks help from the formerly shrunken (and now gigantic) Mandy in the third and final issue of Watch Your Tongue!



Synopsis: Now that Nat has the shrinking curse, can she learn the lesson that Mandy did or will she shrink away to nothingness?

Release date: August 1st, 2018
Written by: a0040pc
Lineart by: Michela Da Sacco
Colors by: Ylenia Di Napoli

Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, giantess, micro, handheld, magic

Series Link: Watch Your Tongue

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Unread 08-01-2018   #2
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Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

fantastic, loved this one
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Unread 08-01-2018   #3
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Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

I would say most of this comic is decent.

I do like the hand held and measuring scenes. The size comparison at the end it really good also.

The story transitions smoothly from scene to scene. It also conveys a passage of time.

The art looks better this time around. It is also maintains size consistency better.

What I think could be improved is the pace of the story and the shrinking scenes. The passage of time seemed to fast to me. I also, didn't like how it ended.

With the shrinking I think it doesn't really show it smoothly and less like jump cuts. At least for me it needed better reference points to make it easier to show her shrinking.
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Unread 08-01-2018   #4
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Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

This comic was not very interesting from a story perspective. The boyfriend is unbelievable. Art is OK but every shrinking process seemed to involve the same setup, outfit, and progression. It was repetitive and not in a good way.

Chapter 02 was OK, but this comic kinda dragged on. I am hoping this series is put on ice and that other writers are given a chqnce who might understand how to create tension or or write smarter characters who don't act like drugged-out bitches.
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Unread 08-02-2018   #5
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Re: Watch Your Tongue 3 - Shrink Fan Comics

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fantastic, loved this one
Glad you liked it!

In response to the feedback: the Watch Your Tongue series is effectively finished. The writer felt the story was played out with this one.
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