Queen's Artifact

[Tiedefender]

I thought I would share a story I was working on as well. It was the precursor story to "New Lara Croft Downsized" commission Shrink Fan Comics did for me.
This is the third draft so far. It contains: shrinking woman, shrinking man, sexual content. I hope you enjoy.

Queen's Artifact

Lara Croft began her search for a powerful artifact in a forgotten jungle. Said to control an objects size. Lara moved through the overgrown vegetation to find an entrance to a hidden ruin. The corridor was dark and cramped. She could barely squeeze through with her large bosom. Finally, she made it to the center of the ruin. Lara found she was in the Queens Tomb.

Lara continued into the heart of the tomb. In the next room she could only find one small outlet. The small opening must have been 18 inches tall by 12 inches wide. It was to dark to see inside. Some identifying markings above the hole identify it as the entrance to the tomb of the Queen's burial chamber and inside is the artifact.

Standing in-front of the tiny door way Lara sees a quick glow of light. The light had engulfed Lara. She felt a warm glow throughout her body, and then the light vanished.

Then Lara noticed her clothes began to fit loosely to her body. Lara began to shrink at a noticeable rate. Her backpack and boots qere quickly became a hindrance, and had to take them off. Whiler her large prominent breasts recede under her green top. Lara could not hold on to her belt and holsters and let them hit the floor with a clack. Lara's hand shrunk out from her gloves and fell to the floor. Lara's top and shorts follow as Lara reaches less then half her size. Lara clung to her mint green sports bra. That is until it was to massive to hold. Only Lara's sexy green sports panties shrank with her. Lara stood in the middle of her clothes at fifteen inches tall.

Looking around, "I'm definitely small enough to fit through. But now I'm going to be bouncing in the breeze. But why did my panties shrink too? I need to find a way to fix this. Just got to start by climbing out over of my bra. Each cup is nearly half my size now."

Lara slowly made the trek through to the other room. Once inside it was filled with that same glow but she didn't feel the same warmth. The glow emanated from a small statue on a pedestal. It was in the shape of a woman. Her long slender legs together and hands clasped under her large breasts. To Lara's right the Queens sarcophagus with an inscription.

Lara reading the inscription, "I await the chosen keeper of my artifact. The woman with massive mammaries who will not fear being tinier then an ant. Those afraid should turn back and be restored. Any who try to return my artifact will be given back their size. My chosen return my artifact to the place you were first shrank."

"The power to shrink people would be dangerous in the wrong hands. Eventually this place wont be safe from the outside world. May as well keep it safe in my collection."

Lara began lining up to take the artifact with the hallway she came through. Taking the statue she took off running. Lara was holding the statue in her right hand. While she held her breasts with her left arm to make running easier. Following the tunnel back to her clothes and shrinking all the way. The artifact shrinking with her. Lara not knowing how small she was getting.

Lara sees her clothes, "I can't be more than three inches tall and still getting smaller."

Lara finishing the run to her sports bra and jumping onto her bra. Lara is now less than two inches tall. Lara finding determination while shrinking. The threads of her bra looking even bigger. Running down the middle passing between the cups of her bra, Lara was half an inch tall. With Lara stopping at the top of her bra, she was less than a quarter of an inch tall. Lara hopping off hit the floor. The fall didn't hurt as she was far lighter now. Lara was one eighth of an inch tall when she was no longer shrinking. Still she made it to the center of all her clothes.

Lara is the chosen and started to grow rapidly. The artifact grew in size with her. Lara wasted no time, and got dressed. And put the artifact in her backpack. Lara proceeded to the exit to begin her long journey home. But was stopped near the exit to the jungle by a man. He held Lara at gun point.

"Well Miss Croft I do hope you have what I came for," stated Edward Price.

"Nothing that you will have. Honestly an amateur like you should stay home Price."

"Do you not see that I'm the one holding the gun."

"All I see is another man staring at my boobs again. Must be you want to get between them more than taking the artifact," chided Lara.

"What I'm not sta..."

Edward was interrupted when his pants fell down. His clothes became larger on him. His pistol dropped to the ground. His underwear fell to his ankles as his shirt reached his knees. In moments Edward was fully naked at about four inches tall surrounded by his clothes. He looked up at Lara who let out, "How adorable."

"Seems I should be more careful with this artifact around. Who knows it's full range and capabilities," Lara thought.

"How? Why did you do this?" Edward shouted.

"Goodbye Edward," Lara said cheerfully.

"Wait don't leave me like this! I don't want to die out here."

Lara decided to take him with her. "He could be real fun to keep around," Lara reasoned. She picked up all of Edward's things and stuffed them into her backpack with no room for him. But she had a better place for him.

"Seems I don't have room in here for you. But I have a better place in mind."

"Where would that be?" Ed questioned sheepishly.

"Right where you wanted to be in the first place," grinned Lara.

Lara picking up Edward and placing Edward in front her colossal tits and his penis stuck between. Lara starting to walk out of the ruins, with her boobs rubbing up and down on his erect penis as she walks. Lara was bringing him to orgasm before she made it outside.

Looking at Edward, "No self control. We can fool around when we get home. Do continue to enjoy the ride home between my breasts, I know I will."

"No stop!" Edward shouted. "Just make me big again. I'll leave and not trouble you any more." He cried out afraid of his future.

A few days later at Lara arrives home. She takes Mr. Price to the bathroom and proceeded to clean him. After, she finished with him Lara locked him in her underwear drawer. Then proceeded to take a shower. Edward fell asleep in side one of Lara's panties as she showered.

In the morning Edward woke up full size again. But Lara was siting on him with her back to him. Lara was wearing glossy black satin panties matching satin bra. She turned around gently straddling his cock.

"So let's have some new fun." Lara stated enthusiastically.

Lara seductively takes off her bra and grabs Edward's hands. She takes his hands and bra and ties them to the bed above his head. All the while her breasts swing in front of his face.

Lara begins to shrink and is rapidly get smaller. As she neared one fourth her size Lara pretended to hide behind her panties, to tease him. Soon her head slipped below her panties and she had to drop them. Now Lara is three inches tall with only her panties between her and Edward. The front of her panties strategically covered the tip. Lara wasted no time to wrap her arms and legs around Edward's penis with her breasts pressed up against the head. And begins to rub her self along his cock. Finally, after several minutes pass Edward reaches climax. The force was so strong Lara was nearly thrown off. As planned Edward came all over the front of Lara's panties instead of her. This prevented a sticky mess. Moments later she was full size again.

"So do you really want to go home so soon Mr. Price?" Lara asked rhetorically.

Edward was slowly shrinking again. As he did Lara put her dirty panties in the laundry, and then sat on the bed. Without any prompting Edward got between Lara's legs. While he was still shrinking Edward began cunnilingus on Lara who was wet already. Soon he was small enough to need to use his whole body. Lara was lying down lightly biting her lip. Waves of pleasure building up and finally release. Taking Edward, Lara went to the bathroom to get them selves clean.

[Anotherfetishguy]

Really good, thanks for sharing!

My only suggestion is to focus a little more on the out of clothes process (specifically shoes but thats me).

[Captain Ash]

I really liked the teasing parts.

Just one thing:
I'm not a Lara Croft fan and had no idea who this Edward Price was.
Even a quick search in google was fruitless.
So a little more introductions to the characters would be nice, because I had no idea how he looks like and how he usually behaves.
But I got the impression that he is quite a coward.

Thanks for sharing.

Greetings
Captain Ash

[Tiedefender]

Originally Posted by Anotherfetishguy

Really good, thanks for sharing!

My only suggestion is to focus a little more on the out of clothes process (specifically shoes but thats me).

Unfortunately I'm not skilled at such things. But I can give it a try, no promises.

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

I really liked the teasing parts.

Just one thing:
I'm not a Lara Croft fan and had no idea who this Edward Price was.
Even a quick search in google was fruitless.
So a little more introductions to the characters would be nice, because I had no idea how he looks like and how he usually behaves.
But I got the impression that he is quite a coward.

Thanks for sharing.

Greetings
Captain Ash

Edward Price was a name I made up. Though the last name Price I got from Vincent Price.
Yeah introductions didn't cross my mind. Good thing this is only a third draft. I wasn't fully satisfied with it yet. Though the original idea was for a commission that grew to big.

Thank you both for the feed back. I was starting to think this thread was a mistake. Maybe at some point I can work on draft 4.

[Captain Ash]

Why should this thread be a mistake?
As long as you get valueable feedback.

Just retry it.
This time with more background info of Mr. Price.
How does he looks like?
How did they met?
How is his character like?
etc.

Greetings
Captain Ash

[Tiedefender]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

Why should this thread be a mistake?
As long as you get valueable feedback.

Just retry it.
This time with more background info of Mr. Price.
How does he looks like?
How did they met?
How is his character like?
etc.

Greetings
Captain Ash

To answer your question, I was never good at writing and started feeling insecure about posting the story. It had views, but no one was saying anything about the story.

I will but don't expect anything soon. It will probably take a number of hours to write that stuff.

[qzar9999]

Well, I liked it. Your writing could maybe use a bit more polish, but it certainly isn't bad. Thanks for sharing!

Y'know, this could make a decent comic script...

[Tiedefender]

Originally Posted by qzar9999

Well, I liked it. Your writing could maybe use a bit more polish, but it certainly isn't bad. Thanks for sharing!

Y'know, this could make a decent comic script...

Thank you for the kind words.

To be fair I was only ever a B student when it came to writing. I still have lots of trouble with grammar, spelling and verb tense.

Funny you say comic script. That's because the original idea was for a shrinking Lara Croft commission for Shrink Fan Comics. The basics of the idea are in the story I posted. But the story grew to big for a give away. So I changed it to "New Lara Croft Downsized."

I will say thank you again to the nice editor who made "New Lara Croft Downsized" better.

qzar9999 I have no problems if you want use it for shrink fan comics. Though I imagine when I finish draft 4 of this story it will be longer.

[Anotherfetishguy]

Laura Craft Downsized Comic Leak:

[Tiedefender]

Just wanted to let everyone know that I have been working on the story. I have an updated version ready. I don't know if I should make a new post with the updated version. Or if I should edit the story in the original post.

[Tiedefender]

This is the latest version.

Queen's Artifact

The world famous British archaeologist and Tomb Raider Lara Croft arrived at her destination. Fearlessly moved deeper into the jungle filled with deadly animals. With acrobatic mastery, Lara gracefully crossed the treacherous terrain as her braided auburn-brown hair followed behind her. She had her dual Browning Hi-Power 9mm pistols in her hip holsters should any animal come her way.

Lara Croft began her search for a powerful artifact in a forgotten jungle. Said to control an objects size. Lara moved through the overgrown vegetation to find an entrance to a hidden ruin. The corridor was cramped for the five foot nine inch Lara. She could barely squeeze through with her large bosom. Finally, she made it to the center of the ruin. Lara found she was in the Queens Tomb.

Lara continued into the heart of the tomb. In the next room she could only find one small outlet. The small opening must have been 18 inches tall by 12 inches wide. It was to dark to see inside. Some identifying markings above the hole identify it as the entrance to the tomb of the Queen's burial chamber and inside is the artifact.

Standing in front of the tiny door way Lara sees a quick glow of light. The light had engulfed Lara. She felt a warm glow throughout her body, and then the light vanished.

Then Lara noticed her clothes began to fit loosely to her body. Lara began to shrink at a noticeable rate. Her backpack and boots quickly became an oversized hindrance. The weight of the backpack pressed harder on her shoulders. Lara's socks slumped to her ankles as her feet diminished in her boots and had to take them off. While her large prominent breasts recede under her green top. Lara could not hold on to her belt and holsters and let them hit the floor with a clack. Lara's hand shrunk out from her gloves and fell to the floor. Lara's top and shorts follow as Lara reaches less then half her size. Lara clung to her mint green sports bra. That is until it was to massive to hold. Only Lara's sexy green sports panties shrank with her. Lara stood in the middle of her clothes at fifteen inches tall.

Looking around, "I'm definitely small enough to fit through. But now I'm going to be bouncing in the breeze. But why did my panties shrink too? I need to find a way to fix this. Just got to start by climbing out over of my bra. Each cup is nearly half my size now."

Lara slowly made the trek through to the other room. Once inside it was filled with that same glow but she didn't feel the same warmth. The glow emanated from a small statue on a pedestal. It was in the shape of a woman. Her long slender legs together and hands clasped under her large breasts. To Lara's right the Queens sarcophagus with an inscription.

Lara reading the inscription, "I await the chosen keeper of my artifact. The woman with massive mammaries who will not fear being tinier then an ant. Those afraid should turn back and be restored. Any who try to return my artifact will be given back their size. My chosen return my artifact to the place you were first shrank."

"The power to shrink people would be dangerous in the wrong hands. Eventually this place wont be safe from the outside world. May as well keep it safe in my collection."

Lara began lining up to take the artifact with the hallway she came through. Taking the statue she took off running. Lara was holding the statue in her right hand. While she held her breasts with her left arm to make running easier. Following the tunnel back to her clothes and shrinking all the way. The artifact shrinking with her. Lara not knowing how small she was getting.

Lara sees her clothes, "I can't be more than three inches tall and still getting smaller."

Lara finishing the run to her sports bra and jumping onto her bra. Lara is now less than two inches tall. Lara finding determination while shrinking. The threads of her bra looking even bigger. Running down the middle passing between the cups of her bra, Lara was half an inch tall. With Lara stopping at the top of her bra, she was less than a quarter of an inch tall. Lara hopping off hit the floor. The fall didn't hurt as she was far lighter now. Lara was one eighth of an inch tall when she was no longer shrinking. Still she made it to the center of all her clothes.

Lara is the chosen and started to grow rapidly. The artifact grew in size with her. Lara wasted no time, and got dressed. And put the artifact in her backpack. Lara proceeded to the exit to begin her long journey home.

However, Lara was stopped near the exit to the jungle. Lara was held at gun point. That man is Edward Price. A man that deals in theft of all kinds of ancient pieces and smuggle them. With a reputation of lechery. Price stood shorter than Lara by three inches. His suave platinum blonde hair the most obvious feature of his wiry frame. He wore a light brown shirt with the sleeves rolled up, with full length light brown pants. In his right hand he held a Heckler & Koch .45 ACP pistol.

"Well Miss Croft I do hope you have what I came for," stated Edward Price.

"Nothing that you will have. Honestly an amateur like you should stay home Price." Lara continued to mock Mr. Price. "Did you learn nothing from are last encounter? When I sent you scurrying off."

"You fired a rocket launcher at me and my men when you surprised us. If not for your interference I would have gotten that idol and been ten million dollars richer. Now I have you at a disadvantage."

"I'm hardly at a disadvantage Price."

"Are you blind? I'm the one holding the gun."

"All I see is another man staring at my boobs again. Must be you want to get between them more than taking the artifact," chided Lara.

"What I'm not sta..."

Edward was interrupted when his pants fell down. He quickly grabbed and pulled them back up. As his clothes became larger on him, he started to lose balance. His feet came out of his boots and was now stepping on the hem of the pants. His pistol dropped to the ground in the struggle to keep from everything on. The shirt reached his knees as he dropped his pants. His underwear fell to his ankles with the shirt. In moments Edward was fully naked at four inches tall surrounded by his clothes. He looked up at Lara who let out, "How adorable."

"Seems I should be more careful with this artifact around. Who knows it's full range and capabilities," Lara thought.

"How? Why did you do this?" Edward shouted.

"Goodbye Edward," Lara said cheerfully.

"Wait don't leave me like this! I don't want to die out here."

Lara decided to take him with her. "He could be real fun to keep around," Lara reasoned. She picked up all of Edward's things and stuffed them into her backpack with no room for him. But she had a better place for him.

"Seems I don't have room in here for you. But I have a better place in mind."

"Where would that be?" Ed questioned sheepishly. Uncertain what she would do to him in such a vulnerable state.

"Right where you wanted to be in the first place," grinned Lara.
Lara picking up Edward and placing Edward in front her colossal tits and his penis stuck between. Lara starting to walk out of the ruins, with her boobs rubbing up and down on his erect penis as she walks. Lara was bringing him to orgasm before she made it outside.

Looking at Edward, "No self control. We can fool around when we get home. Do continue to enjoy the ride home between my breasts, I know I will."

"No stop!" Edward shouted. "Just make me big again. I'll leave and not trouble you any more." He cried out afraid of his future.

On the trip back to Lara's mansion, Edward contemplated escape. But he had know idea how Lara shrunk him. At his size he could not survive for long. And he was trapped by Lara's immense tits. The bright side is Lara's breasts are cozy enough to fall asleep.

A few days later at Lara arrives home. She takes Mr. Price to the bathroom and proceeded to clean him. After, she finished with him Lara locked him in her underwear drawer. Then proceeded to take a shower. Edward fell asleep in side one of Lara's panties as she showered.

In the morning Edward woke up full size again. But Lara was siting on him with her back to him. Lara was wearing glossy black satin panties matching satin bra. She turned around gently straddling his cock.

"So let's have some new fun." Lara stated enthusiastically.

Lara seductively takes off her bra and grabs Edward's hands. She takes his hands and bra and ties them to the bed above his head. All the while her large breasts swing in front of his face.

Lara begins to shrink and is rapidly get smaller. As she neared one fourth her size Lara pretended to hide behind her panties, to tease him. Soon her head slipped below her panties and she had to drop them. Now Lara is three inches tall with only her panties between her and Edward. The front of her panties strategically covered the tip. Lara wasted no time to wrap her arms and legs around Edward's penis with her breasts pressed up against the head. And begins to rub her self along his cock. Finally, after several minutes pass Edward reaches climax. The force was so strong Lara was nearly thrown off. As planned Edward came all over the front of Lara's panties instead of her. This prevented a sticky mess. Moments later she was full size again.

"So do you really want to go home so soon Mr. Price?" Lara asked rhetorically.

Edward was slowly shrinking again. As he did Lara put her dirty panties in the laundry, and then sat on the bed. Without any prompting Edward got between Lara's legs. While he was still shrinking Edward began cunnilingus on Lara who was wet already. Soon he was small enough to need to use his whole body. Lara was lying down lightly biting her lip. Waves of pleasure building up and finally release. Taking Edward, Lara went to the bathroom to get them selves clean.

[Anotherfetishguy]

Originally Posted by Tiedefender

Her backpack and boots were quickly became an oversized hindrance.

You may want to fix that sentence.