Teen Titan Starfire WG

06-01-2008

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06-01-2008

May I be the first to say that was a complete and utter load of shit.

Pardon my lack of pirate-talk, but it's just that bad I have to state it off the bat as such.

wasurenai · 06-01-2008

Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.

Metatron · 06-01-2008

An interesting story if I may be frank I think you need to work on color consistency your character (starfire) seems to have her uniform break on page 3 and it turns to blue on page 4 but then at the top of page 5 for 3 panels it turns back to purple then back to blue.
Over all I'd give it a solid B+

humble.fool · 06-01-2008

I can't tell if it's all done in MS Paint, or if you drew this out by hand and then tried to color it in MS Paint; in the end, it's pretty poor as wank material.

TanukiCannon · 06-02-2008

Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class.
Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too.

It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".

Anurubius · 06-02-2008

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06-02-2008

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Originally Posted by wasurenai

Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.

It be lookin' like I be in the mob mentality fer this topic.

ProfessorMishap · 06-02-2008

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Originally Posted by long john silver

It be lookin' like I be in the mob mentality fer this topic.

If I'm not mistaken it was Lorekeep himself who said "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So let this be a warning to you Cap, watch what you say when reviewing art or you'll be walking the plank, ya get me?

06-02-2008

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Originally Posted by LinkG07

If I'm not mistaken it was Lorekeep himself who said "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it at all." So let this be a warning to you Cap, watch what you say when reviewing art or you'll be walking the plank, ya get me?

Aye, that might be true, but no one else be against sayin' this sorta thing fer this land-lubber's wares.

ProfessorMishap · 06-02-2008

Wrong way: Ugh, this is the worst art I've ever seen. It stinks!

Right way: Ehhh, you need a little more practice. If this is what you want to do, keep trying.

And besides, he said he did this comic a long time ago. Its not his current art style.

06-02-2008

If ye be goin' soft on this type, they be only goin' to perpetuait their current methods, and never progress.

Trust me, I be seein' it all over the place, there be this one guy who be drawin' the same damned circles in MSpaint fer more than ten years, and has the gull to say he be progressin' in his art style, with no viable evidence to prove it.

06-01-2008	#1
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06-01-2008	#2
long john silver Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG May I be the first to say that was a complete and utter load of shit. Pardon my lack of pirate-talk, but it's just that bad I have to state it off the bat as such.

06-01-2008	#3
wasurenai Ail-Soft Aficionado Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 482	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG Be warned, brutal honesty is a punishable offense here, cap'n.

06-01-2008	#4
Metatron Alea iacta est Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,056	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG An interesting story if I may be frank I think you need to work on color consistency your character (starfire) seems to have her uniform break on page 3 and it turns to blue on page 4 but then at the top of page 5 for 3 panels it turns back to purple then back to blue. Over all I'd give it a solid B+

06-01-2008	#5
humble.fool Rubber Band Man Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 320	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG I can't tell if it's all done in MS Paint, or if you drew this out by hand and then tried to color it in MS Paint; in the end, it's pretty poor as wank material. __________________ My Homepage.

06-02-2008	#6
TanukiCannon Lurker Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 19	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG Erm... Maybe you should start with a 5th grade spelling class. Then check it's consistent, and also check for out of character moments (of which there were plenty) those can kind of ruin a story too. It's just hard to take something seriously with words like "quitted".

06-02-2008	#7
Anurubius engage your mandibles! Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: on my gts wife's shoulder Posts: 223	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG ... ... ... ..."eat-o-matic" ... ... wow. __________________ Blurring Lines: the struggle between light and dark just got more complicated

06-02-2008	#11
ProfessorMishap Oh dear, not again! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: I'm standing right behind you!! Posts: 2,158	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG Wrong way: Ugh, this is the worst art I've ever seen. It stinks! Right way: Ehhh, you need a little more practice. If this is what you want to do, keep trying. And besides, he said he did this comic a long time ago. Its not his current art style.

06-02-2008	#12
long john silver Guest Posts: n/a	Re: Teen Titan Starfire WG If ye be goin' soft on this type, they be only goin' to perpetuait their current methods, and never progress. Trust me, I be seein' it all over the place, there be this one guy who be drawin' the same damned circles in MSpaint fer more than ten years, and has the gull to say he be progressin' in his art style, with no viable evidence to prove it.