02-23-2018 | #1 |
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A Little too Much
I'm not 100% happy with how this turned out but I don't hate it. Let me know what you think.
Note this takes place in the same universe as Little by Little. This shows some more of the perils women in this world face. Jessica lay in bed. The sheets were thrown everywhere and she was still covered in sweat. She swung her legs over the bed and her feet dangled above the floor. “Damn it, I haven’t grown back yet…” She complained to herself. She stood up and walked to her mirror, which had a ruler painted along its side. She held her hand up to it and took a measurement. “Four, four…” She mumbled to herself, “People are gonna think I’m a slut.” She said as she started getting dressed. The normally tight fitting sweats were very baggy on her. She pulled the draw string as tight as it could and smirked triumphantly when she realized it could still be pulled tighter. Her shirt would fit her like a mini dress except it dangled off of her slender frame exposing much of her cleavage. At school she got looks. She knew she would. People could guess she got pretty small last night, so she must be easy. Maybe she was. After all she never once refused him. Not last night, not ever. She had no will power when it came to him. She knew he was using her for sex but she didn’t care. She loved him. “Oh my god, you’re such a slut.” Said a voice from behind. It was Becky, the captain of the girls’ volleyball team. “You’re, like, as tall as my little sister and she’s still in grade school!” Jessica turned around to find herself face to crotch with the massive girl. Becky was roughly 6’1”. Even at her full height of 5’5” Becky towered over her but at her current stature she was immense. “What I do in my free time is none of your business.” Jessica retorted. She turned and continued walking to her class. That’s when she saw him. He was standing outside of her homeroom. Waiting for her. She suddenly forgot how embarrassed she was and ran right up to him. “Hey babe, have you seen your older sister?” He said. “Hah ha, very funny.” Jessica grumbled, “You know it’s your fault I’m still like this.” “I know.” He said. “You have study hall last period, right? We should both bail early and get home- start the weekend early.” “Okay, sure” Jessica replied. What was she saying? She’d never skip class. But she’d also never say no to him. “Alright then, I’ll see you after class short stuff.” He said as he leaned in for a kiss. Jessica felt herself fall as she shrank an inch right there on the spot. She didn’t care. She had him. During the rest of the school day she kept getting looks. Slowly but surely she grew. By lunch she had almost reached 5’. By Study Hall she was nearly 5’3”. She went straight to her locker and grabbed her stuff before sneaking out one of the side doors. There he was waiting for her next to his car. He was on his phone and quickly wrapped up his conversation when he caught eye of her. “Hey babe, almost back to normal?” He said teasingly. “No thanks to you.” Jessica replied. They both got in the car and He sped off. “Where are we going?” “I figure we can hang out at my place for a bit. Maybe you can spend the night?” He said suavely. “Sure, sounds fun.” Jessica said. She felt a rush. She wanted him badly and he knew it. They arrived at His apartment and went straight to the bed room. Jessica sat at the end of the bed and kicked her feet playfully. “So…. What did you want to do?” She asked. “You, of course.” He said as he pushed her onto her back and began kissing her. She felt weak. She couldn’t think straight. Her mind went to his lips. She felt a rush shoot through her. She was shrinking, she could tell. She tried to contain herself but she couldn’t. She wrapped her arms and legs around him as he started biting her neck. “God, fuck me, please.” Jessica screamed, “Make me your little sex toy!” They both frantically undressed. The sight of his naked body and his erect manhood made her drool. He threw her onto the bed and climbed over her. Slowly he inserted his dick into her hungry pussy. She could feel him starching her. She felt empty and she needed him to fill her up. He bucked up and down driving his cock in and out. With each thrust Jessica felt his member grow a little larger as she got a little tighter. She could see a noticeable difference in their relative heights now. She estimated she was about 5’ tall at that moment. “Shrink for me you little slut.” He growled into her ear. She let out a gasp as she felt her body rapidly pull inwards. In almost an instant she shrank 2 inches. He felt so big insider of her and she was getting so close. “I’m gonna cum, don’t stop.” She cried as she began bucking her hips in time to His. She could feel a pressure building inside of her and as she came it was released. She screamed out in ecstasy as she rapidly deflated below His toned body; her pussy squeezing him tighter and tighter. “Oh god it won’t stop!” She said as she continued to shake and shrink. This sent Him over the edge as He came, filling her petite, now 4’ even body full of his cum. She felt like she was going to burst. Slowly, He pulled out of her. His cum was gushing out of her tiny little pussy. She lay there basking in the aftershocks of her orgasm, dwindling ever so slightly with each spasm. Before she could catch his breath He rolled her over and started probing her ass with his cock. “Wait, we should take a breather, I’m getting pretty small.” Jessica said. “I’ll be gentle, don’t worry. Come on babe, I know you want it too.” He said confidently. “Okay.” She said with a smile. He wiped some of the juices from her vag onto His tip and used it to lube up. Slowly he slipped into her ass hole. Jessica grabbed the bed sheets as her ass was overwhelmed by his enormous cock. Bit by bit is lipped into her. She could already feel it getting bigger as she started shrinking. Her ass was like a vice, now, and was starting to cut off circulation. He pulled out making a sucking pop sound. “Why’d you stop? Jessica purred. “Your ass was too tight. It was starting to hurt.” He said as he rolled he over and started licking and teasing her nipples. “I’m getting really small, we should probably stop.” She said. He wasn’t listening, though. He could tell she was approaching the 3’ mark and it was driving him mad. He moved over her and pinned her arms to the bed as he started grinding his cock against her slight frame. “Just a little more, please?” He said not waiting for permission to start nibbling her neck again. “Okay, just a little more.” She said enraptured by his touch. His phone went off but they both ignored it. His cock was rubbing her clit just right. She was on the verge of another orgasm when the door swung open. “Have you finished with that little slut yet?” rang out a voice. It was Becky. “I think she’s manageable.” He said climbing off of her. Jessica sat up. This was surreal, what was happening? She was just 2’6” sitting on her boyfriend’s bed and her arch nemesis just barged in. Becky started to get undressed. She seductively pulled her shirt over her head, unclasped her bra and let her skirt and panties fall to the floor as the shrinking had already begun for her. “What’s going on?” Jessica finally managed to say, working up the courage to speak. “You see, it’s like this.” He said, “You’re the bronze medal and Becky is the gold. I’m trading up and tonight we’re gonna give you a sendoff for the ages.” Becky crawled onto bed and shoved her pussy into Jessica’s face and started grinding against it. “Christ, she’s so small I love it!” Becky screamed as she started shrinking from the pleasure. Becky pushed Jessica onto her back and started flicking her tongue over her little nipples and inserted a finger into her tiny pussy. Jessica tried to struggle but she was too weak and the pleasure was too intense. “She’s definitely the smallest bitch I’ve ever seen.” Becky said between suckling on Jessica’s breasts. “I’ve seen smaller…” He said callously. He was standing over the bed jerking off to the show. Jessica was nearly a foot tall now. Becky had also shrunk some, now down to 5’2”. Becky pulled he finger from Jessica’s pussy and let her lay there breathing heavily. She felt violated. She wanted to cry. “Shrink for me you little slut.” He gunned as he was getting closer to his second release of the night. She felt her body pull inwards rapidly. She guessed she was maybe 8 inches tall. “Oh wow, what a submissive little slut she is!” Becky said, still touching herself. Becky picked Jessica up and put her onto His night stand, which was at a more appropriate elevation. “Shrink for me you little bitch.” She grunted again getting even closer. Jessica’s body betrayed her and she pulled inward once more, this time down to a mere 3 inches tall. “Shrink you little- AHHHHHH” HE said as he came. He blasted Jessica with his load. Jessica felt as though gallons of cum had hit her. She could also feel herself shrinking again. She screamed as she rapidly dwindled down smaller and smaller. Soon the cum puddle was waist deep. She tried wading through it. She was exhausted and wanted to sleep and forget all of this ever happened. That’s when the light from the lamp was blocked out. Becky licked her finger and gently dipped it onto His Cum blotch where the tiny speck of a woman stood. She brought it to her face to see the tiny Jessica stuck to her finger, too small to wrestle herself free from His cum. Becky licked her finger and in an instant Jessica was gone forever. |
02-23-2018 | #2 |
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Re: A Little too Much
.....well.
That took a rather dark swerve. I was enjoying it at first, but that ending...yeesh.
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02-23-2018 | #3 |
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Re: A Little too Much
Yeah I'm not a fan of the ending myself. I'm seriously considering rewriting it.
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02-23-2018 | #4 |
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Re: A Little too Much
That was awesome! I love shrinking stories like that!!
BTW- what's "Little by Little" universe?
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Re: A Little too Much
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02-23-2018 | #6 |
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Re: A Little too Much
I like the shrinking, hate the cruelty and murder. The dissonance between the two gives me motion sickness. I actually needed antacid after reading it.
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02-24-2018 | #7 |
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So many times with giantess and shrinking stories, there is cruelty and murder. I hate those things too.
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02-24-2018 | #9 |
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Re: A Little too Much
Yeah I wanted to write a story about one of those A-hole guys who have a girl wrapped around his finger and how it would effect the girl. I think I went too far and definitely dropped the ball at the end.
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Honestly, I think you could've gotten away with the plot twist - it's cruel, but effective - if you hadn't then added on murder. That's the deal-breaker for me.
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02-24-2018 | #11 |
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Re: A Little too Much
It's a personal preference thing. It is not for everyone and I totally get why some folks are put off by cruelty and death by vore in shrinking stories. But for me, I love it and this story (and the one Raso 719 linked in response to me) are like my ideal shrinking scenarios.
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Re: A Little too Much
Hmm. I guess some dollies like masochism. Yeah, I know a few people who like cruelty and violence with their SW's. o_O And there is, after all, a violent shrinking forum.
Well, I love sexual shrinking, especially to micro, but I prefer shared pleasure, and I'll often just ignore endings like that. So I like the story for sw process. Sometimes, I make my own copy of a story just for me. I sometimes even highlight the parts I like and mess with the fonts so I can easily see the parts that get me going. Then I use Scrolly Fox (addon for old Firefox) so I can scroll the story automatically. I like the process to go on an on - smaller and smaller. yummmm You should see what I did to the rewrite of "Inch By Inch." ha Also the title of the story is perfect, Ras. hahaa
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