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12-08-2014
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Purveyor of Porn
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Gallifrey
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My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
I'm writing a short story for a friend of mine for Christmas. It's my first-ever TG story, combined with SW, some BE, explicit sex, *possibly* some AR (still on the fence about it), along with some dominance/submission kink. It's still a WIP and I want to get a feel for how it's going, but as it's a Christmas present I don't wish to spoil the surprise. So, I need a test reader who isn't the story's intended recipient. Somebody wanna check it out? Reply or PM and I'll show it to you.
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Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything. |
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Instigator
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: Earth, mostly
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Mine!
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12-08-2014
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Purveyor of Porn
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Ask and ye shall receive. PM sent. And thanks.
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Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything. |
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12-09-2014
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Zone of Darkness
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
I could give it a check as well if you'd like. I'm taking creative writing courses in Uni so I could throw you a critique once I'm done.
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Purveyor of Porn
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Sure, an extra opinion never hurt. Sent you a PM.
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Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything. |
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Join Date: Sep 2014
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Looks like you are set on editors. If you still want an extra pair of eyes, I would be more than glad to give it a look.
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Zone of Darkness
Join Date: Jul 2008
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Seems good so far to me. There are a few things that I personally am not in to, but for what you have there it was done well. Nice, vivid descriptions that don't get too repetitive, and a well-done process (especially for your first TG.)
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12-11-2014
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Think I could give it a look?
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12-11-2014
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Purveyor of Porn
Join Date: Jan 2006
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Re: My first TG+SW story. With other stuff.
Thanks for the feedback, z.
Sure, guys, a couple more opinions won't hurt, I suppose. PMs sent.
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Tace atque abi. Plenus stercoris est. Editor/Writer, Shrink Fan and Transform Fan Check out Interweb Comics on Twitter or Instagram for all kinds of fun, sexy stuff covering multiple fetishes! Cezar's Comix - New 11/15! http://www.e-junkie.com/cezarscomix My eBooks at amzn.to/1CDS22w or bit.ly/1BZqaCp Quidquid Latine dictum altum videtur. My DeviantArt. Full list of my stories here. How I feel when certain users post anything. |
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