The Day I Found A Shrink Ray

[mtshrink]

So I tried my hand at writing a story that's been bouncing around in my head. this is my first story so please, if you have any suggestions, if you want to edit it. what ever let me know so i can improve part two. so please enjoy The Day I Found A Shrink Ray.

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okay so My story is complete. i can't upload odt files and that's what open offices uses. so i had to upload it in .doc please try and read the attachment. it reads much better with the proper formatting. if you can't read the attachment i have pasted it below. i'll try and get around to editing the below post properly over the weekend. Enjoy!

The Day I Found A Shrink Ray

Hi, nice to meet you. My name is Ashley Peach. But you can call me Ash. So, you have come here today to hear my story about how I found my toy? Heh, I’ll remember that day forever.

I found the shrink ray in a storage locker I won at auction. Sometimes I like to buy them and try and make a profit off the items inside. This locker seemed to be no different than any other locker I had purchased in the past. It had a old couch I could get fifty bucks for, an old dresser I could restore (I did by the way and it looks fantastic), a few boxes of clothes, a T.V. and so on. Once I moved most of the stuff out of the way I came across an old wooden box in the corner. It was just a plain wooden box except for a sticker on the side that was just a bar code. It had a latch with a small padlock on it. I wasn’t able to open it at the locker so it had to wait until I got home.

I got home and brought the box into the kitchen. I used a hair pin and picked the lock. I opened it up and chuckled at what I saw. It was two toy ray guns lined in velvet, one normal size and one a quarter of the size. Who would lock up toys like this? I thought to myself. I picked up the bigger one and looked it over. It looked like something out of a old sci-fi movie. Sleek, round and silver. It had an on/off switch and three dials. The handle had a tag hanging off of it that said “Shrink-o-Matic 5000.” This has to be from a movie or something, I thought to myself. I put the gun back down and closed up the box. I'll need to look up on line what this is. I headed to my room to get my laptop and start doing some research.

In my room my curiosity got the better of me and I opened up the box. I picked up the bigger gun again and took a look at the dials. One went from 0 to 100 and was pointed at 90, one went from 0 to 60 and was set to 20, and the third one toggled between seconds, minutes and hours, and it was set to minutes. I flipped the switch to on and the dial on the gun started to glow. Well, it turns on. That means I can get more money for it, if it is worth anything.

I jumped off the bed holding the ray gun out. “People of earth, you will be my slaves!” I yelled to no one. “I will steal your buildings.” I turned toward my dresser and pulled the trigger. The gun made a little pop noise. “You two! You will be my slaves.” I pointed the gun at a picture of my friends on the wall and again pulled the trigger. Giggling I spun towards the mirror. “You!” I pointed at myself. “Who, me?” I said in a meek voice. “You will be my slave!” “No, don’t shrink me!” I said in a campy voice. “You can't escape from the evil mad Shrinkella!” “Please, no” I giggled, and pulled the trigger. This time I felt a zap from the gun. I'd better put this back, I don't want to break it.

I switched the shrink ray off and put it back in its case . I placed it next to my laptop and laid down and started to look up this toy.

Sorry to break from my story for a second but do you need a drink? You look like a you're little parched. No? I see you have slipped off your shoes. I'm glad to see your getting more comfortable. Good then, I’ll continue.

I rubbed my hand as I lay on my stomach. It was still tingling. It wasn’t strong but was still nagging at me. I brushed it off and continued my search. I couldn’t come up with anything when I searched Shrink-o-Matic 5000. I sighed and pushed my glasses back up my nose. I looked over at the box and checked the sticker on the side. It had a bar code and a serial number: SW0G4N00K.

I typed that into the search field and hit enter. I shuddered a little as I hadn’t noticed the tingling had spread all over my body. Instead I was wiggling my toes around in my shoes thinking they must have come untied. But I brushed the thought away when I noticed I had a hit online. It was to the manual. Why would this toy need a manual? I thought as I opened the link. The thing read like an advertisement.

I kicked off my shoes as they both felt like they had become untied. I should have noticed that my socks came with them, followed by my anklet. But I was too busy reading this manual, and the tingling was staring to cloud my thoughts, as it was quite enjoyable.

The Shrink-o-Matic 5000TM is the top of the line in erotic shrink rays. (Erotic shrink rays? I thought to myself.) The Shrink-o-Matic 5000TM only works on living things. It's as easy to use as 1,2,3! Just set the height, set the destination time and pull the trigger. She will never see it coming with our all new erotofusiontm setting.

It was around then when I drifted into a daydream. Did I really have a shrink ray?! My mind raced instantly to my friends. Mandy with her brown hair? I bit my lip and slid my bra strap back up.

“What Mandy, you want to be me slave?” I said as I imagined picking a doll-sized version of my best friend out of her dress. Or maybe Jessica, she was always one of my rivals at the auctions. Mmmm, just watching that smug look turn to confusion sent shivers down my spine as I pictured her dwindling helplessly out of the summer dress she had on today. I reached down and started to tweak my exposed nipple; the thought of her struggling with her dress was making them so hard. Things were starting to get a bit heated so...

You're not daydreaming, are you? I know that chair's big and comfortable, but try to pay attention, you're the one who wanted to hear my story. Anyways...

Things were starting to get a bit heated. My breasts were exposed now, my shirt feeling like it just drifted down. In my daydream I was being undressed by my tiny slaves. I think I would make Jessica smaller than Mandy--she deserves a pet, right? I turned in the neck hole of my shirt and went to lay back. One hand started to move down my stomach while the other one was still teasing my nipple.

I was happy to see that they had already taken my pants off. I'm sure that was Mandy’s idea. She will definitely be getting a pet for this. Resting my head down I started to rub my clit. “Oh, yeah,” I breathed. I lifted my hand to brush a hair away form my nose and that's when it hit something hard. My laptop, I thought. In a moment of clarity I figured I should move it before I break it. I struggled to pull my thoughts away from my little slaves working their way around my body and opened my eyes.

It took a moment to settle in at first. I think the giveaway was the giant coin getting hit up into my crotch by Mario on my shirt. Or the fact that I was using my bra as a makeshift seat. Or the IMAX-sized laptop screen behind me. I don't know if I was still delirious from the shrink ray, but the only thing I could think to say was “Jessica was supposed to be the small one!”

As you can tell I was as surprised as you seem to be. Here, Little one, sit in my lap and enjoy the last part of my story.

“I’m tiny!” I squeaked. I started to panic, but I remembered--“The instructions... I was reading them!” Scrambling out of my bra seat I made my way over to my laptop and started to read. “Shrink-o-matic 5000, yadda, yadda, yadda, shrinks you small, feels good. I know all this!” Ah, here we go.

The Shrink-o-Matic 5000TM comes with its counterpart: the Micromizer 200TM. It's small and discreet. It has all the same features of the Shrink-o-Matic 5000TM, but at a fraction of its size. It's great to shrink someone out one the street*. With the new restore feature the Micromizer 200TM restores even the tiniest adventures back to normal at the click of a button.

My eyes darted over to the box- now as big as a dumpster! I ran over to it and pulled my self up and into the box. Thank God I left it open. I walked over to the Micromizer and looked it over. I found the on/off switch and turned it on. I spotted the restore button and stopped. Well if the shrink ray worked then the restore button should work, I thought to myself. I turned and jumped off the box. I headed over to my oversized shirt and tugged at my bra. After a bit of a struggle, I was able to move it over to my laptop and position it in front of the screen. I collapsed down into the cup of my bra. Oh my god was that the beast seat I have ever had in my life! I used my foot on the touch pad to move the mouse over and click play. The giant screen lit up and so did my face!
“Question. What kind of bear is best?”
“That's a ridiculous question.”
“False...”

Anyways! A few hours later I was back to my normal size. I picked up the phone and I dialed Mandy. “Mandy, it's Ash. Hey, I've had just the worst day. Want to pick up a bottle of wine and watch a few movies? Really? Great, I’ll see you soon!”

Well that’s my story about how I found my toy little one. Now let me put you down and call Jessica for dinner. What? She didn’t tell you? But you have to stay tonight, I’ve already made dinner. And I have an extra small controller so we can play some Smash Bros. Jessica’s bringing wine. Look, what if I let you use the Micromizer on me? Please? Don't worry, you'll be back to normal by morning... or the next day... how's next Tuesday for you?

The End!

[OhZone]

Simply OHYEAH!

Moar!

[Prof_Sai]

.doc? MS word is evil.

[Shrinkmaster22]

Very nice, can't wait read more.

[qzar9999]

Well, I'm interested. I suspect that whoever she's telling her story to is in for a really big surprise...

BTW if you want a proofreader let me know.

[OhZone]

Originally Posted by Prof_Sai

.doc? MS word is evil.

Just use Word (or possibly Open Office?)to save as html, when it's long enough to schlick or fap to. Then open in Firefox and use scrolly fox firefox addon to let it scroll up the page automatically, while you - you know, have your hands busy. You can <ctrl>- or + to adjust the page size before scrolling.


OHYEAH!

[mtshrink]

I did use open office. I'll try re-saving it later. Qzar if you wanted to give me some notes on the story. I woukdent mind editing what I have so far. In glad you guys like it so far.

[Captain Ash]

A very nice start.
I like the style how you play with the words.
Good work on how you made it to make her daydream without noticing her that she is actually shrinking.
Only drawback: you introduced Jessica too swiftly. You start mentioning her, but the reader doesn't know about their relationship. A little bit more detail about her character would have been nice.

If you have more chapters, just post them. No need to upload them in a document.

Keep on the good work.

Captain Ash

[mtshrink]

Originally Posted by Captain Ash

A very nice start.


If you have more chapters, just post them. No need to upload them in a document.

Captain Ash

i tried but it lost all the formatting and due to laziness i didn't feel like trying to reformat it. ill give it a try once the next part is done.

[OhZone]

Can't wait! OHYEAH!

[mtshrink]

Ninja update. check the attachment in the OP the story is complete. you can thank Qzar for proofreading it and editing it for me. enjoy!

[OhZone]

Very nice edit.

((I needs to write my own story though!))