Ranma fanfic tg by apsm.

Apsm · 12-20-2017

This is my attempt in answering a question that may intrigue Ranma fans: what happened when Ranma first fell into Spring of Drowned Girl?

I decided to take things in a slight psychological horror route, though I don't think I executed it well. Let me know what you think.

https://www.deviantart.com/art/Ranma...rt-1-721005023

https://www.deviantart.com/art/Ranma...rt-2-721005270

foebits · 12-23-2017

Well, overall it feels very rushed even if it's far superior to most things out there (Oh "X" happened, better get mah tits out). As for the psychological horror you tried to create... It's completely absent; there isn't a shred of anything remotely scary going on. because his mentality isn't very well established. Basically, it's something like "It's scary to him because reasons".

A good try.

12-20-2017	#1
Apsm Lurker/budding TG author Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 269	Ranma fanfic tg by apsm. This is my attempt in answering a question that may intrigue Ranma fans: what happened when Ranma first fell into Spring of Drowned Girl? I decided to take things in a slight psychological horror route, though I don't think I executed it well. Let me know what you think. https://www.deviantart.com/art/Ranma...rt-1-721005023 https://www.deviantart.com/art/Ranma...rt-2-721005270 __________________ -Male characters I like to see TG'd: Koizumi (Haruhi), Shinji (EVA), Keitaro (Love Hina), Satoshi (DNAngel) -Female characters I'd like to be (Update): Rei (EVA), Ami and Haruka (Sailor Moon), Nene (BGC2040), Teletha (FMP), Haruhi and Mikuru(Haruhi Suzumiya), Yourichi and Rangiku (Bleach), Riza(FMA), Lenalee (D Gray Man), Ennis (Baccano).

12-23-2017	#2
foebits planetsauce Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 113	Re: Ranma fanfic tg by apsm. Well, overall it feels very rushed even if it's far superior to most things out there (Oh "X" happened, better get mah tits out). As for the psychological horror you tried to create... It's completely absent; there isn't a shred of anything remotely scary going on. because his mentality isn't very well established. Basically, it's something like "It's scary to him because reasons". A good try.