12-28-2016 | #1 |
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My First Transformation
You guys may have seen this already, but I made this transformation. It's my first one, so it's mostly a test. Hopefully the first of many.
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12-28-2016 | #2 |
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Re: My First Transformation
A very nice firt work!
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12-31-2016 | #3 |
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Re: My First Transformation
awesomE!! do more!
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12-31-2016 | #4 |
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12-31-2016 | #5 |
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Re: My First Transformation
Really good work, especially for a first effort! I certainly look forward to what else you have in store.
For the record, I especially enjoy transgender sequences emphasizing shrinking and a reaction that isn't necessarily positive. You give him/her an expression that very effectively conveys initial bewildered confusion. Possibly the beginnings of panic. Personally, it always bugs me when someone gets a whole new body and they just go with it. It's simply no fun if they're okay with it! Last edited by Case Scenario; 12-31-2016 at 09:15 PM. |
01-02-2017 | #6 |
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Re: My First Transformation
Thanks, for the encouragement everyone. I've really dived in and I'm working on a new transformation. It will involve this unfortunate soul, who has gone hunting for the wrong witch...
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01-07-2017 | #7 |
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Actually that's pretty awesome!! For a first work even better!! Excellent!
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01-18-2017 | #8 |
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Re: My First Transformation
So the man transitions from man to woman, using hormones provided by the National Elf Service?
Good work mate. XD
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01-19-2017 | #9 |
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My only real advice (and this might just be a matter of personal taste) would be to reconsider the audio. That "squishy squishy" sound effect is a little gross and distracting. I'd suggest leaving the work silent, or finding some other kind of background noise.
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01-20-2017 | #10 |
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Thanks for the feedback, Case! I like sound FX in my transformations, but I won't be using this one again. Gotta have some variety.
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01-28-2017 | #11 |
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Re: My First Transformation
Great stuff, can't wait to see your new work!
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