My First Transformation

EmoryAhlberg · 12-28-2016

You guys may have seen this already, but I made this transformation. It's my first one, so it's mostly a test. Hopefully the first of many.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FTHMr0IOoo

Amazeroth · 12-28-2016

A very nice firt work!

lolo2001 · 12-31-2016

awesomE!! do more!

Octorber13 · 12-31-2016

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Originally Posted by lolo2001

awesomE!! do more!

Agreed

Case Scenario · 12-31-2016

Really good work, especially for a first effort! I certainly look forward to what else you have in store.

For the record, I especially enjoy transgender sequences emphasizing shrinking and a reaction that isn't necessarily positive. You give him/her an expression that very effectively conveys initial bewildered confusion. Possibly the beginnings of panic.

Personally, it always bugs me when someone gets a whole new body and they just go with it. It's simply no fun if they're okay with it!

EmoryAhlberg · 01-02-2017

Thanks, for the encouragement everyone. I've really dived in and I'm working on a new transformation. It will involve this unfortunate soul, who has gone hunting for the wrong witch...

p2766479 · 01-07-2017

Actually that's pretty awesome!! For a first work even better!! Excellent!

Scorch · 01-18-2017

So the man transitions from man to woman, using hormones provided by the National Elf Service?

Good work mate. XD

Case Scenario · 01-19-2017

My only real advice (and this might just be a matter of personal taste) would be to reconsider the audio. That "squishy squishy" sound effect is a little gross and distracting. I'd suggest leaving the work silent, or finding some other kind of background noise.

EmoryAhlberg · 01-20-2017

Thanks for the feedback, Case! I like sound FX in my transformations, but I won't be using this one again. Gotta have some variety.

Wedge · 01-28-2017

Great stuff, can't wait to see your new work!

12-28-2016	#1
EmoryAhlberg Lurker Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 22	My First Transformation You guys may have seen this already, but I made this transformation. It's my first one, so it's mostly a test. Hopefully the first of many. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8FTHMr0IOoo

12-28-2016	#2
Amazeroth Black Sheep Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Corona Valley Posts: 447	Re: My First Transformation A very nice firt work! __________________ http://amaz2k12.deviantart.com

12-31-2016	#3
lolo2001 Frequent Poster Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 150	Re: My First Transformation awesomE!! do more!

12-31-2016	#5
Case Scenario Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 453	Re: My First Transformation Really good work, especially for a first effort! I certainly look forward to what else you have in store. For the record, I especially enjoy transgender sequences emphasizing shrinking and a reaction that isn't necessarily positive. You give him/her an expression that very effectively conveys initial bewildered confusion. Possibly the beginnings of panic. Personally, it always bugs me when someone gets a whole new body and they just go with it. It's simply no fun if they're okay with it! Last edited by Case Scenario; 12-31-2016 at 09:15 PM.

01-02-2017	#6
EmoryAhlberg Lurker Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 22	Re: My First Transformation Thanks, for the encouragement everyone. I've really dived in and I'm working on a new transformation. It will involve this unfortunate soul, who has gone hunting for the wrong witch... Last edited by EmoryAhlberg; 01-02-2017 at 03:29 AM.

01-07-2017	#7
p2766479 Frequent Poster Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 175	Re: My First Transformation Actually that's pretty awesome!! For a first work even better!! Excellent!

01-18-2017	#8
Scorch Process Master Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 741	Re: My First Transformation So the man transitions from man to woman, using hormones provided by the National Elf Service? Good work mate. XD __________________ Torn-City - Massively multiplayer online text based RPG

01-19-2017	#9
Case Scenario Frequent Poster Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 453	Re: My First Transformation My only real advice (and this might just be a matter of personal taste) would be to reconsider the audio. That "squishy squishy" sound effect is a little gross and distracting. I'd suggest leaving the work silent, or finding some other kind of background noise.

01-20-2017	#10
EmoryAhlberg Lurker Join Date: Dec 2016 Posts: 22	Re: My First Transformation Thanks for the feedback, Case! I like sound FX in my transformations, but I won't be using this one again. Gotta have some variety.

01-28-2017	#11
Wedge Fan of The Process Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 147	Re: My First Transformation Great stuff, can't wait to see your new work!