09-09-2019 | #1 |
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Free Story - The Hotel
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09-12-2019 | #2 |
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Re: Free Story - The Hotel
that was a nice read, I didn't like a lot the story itself for a matter of personal taste, but technically it's really well written, the story goes straight to the point and the descriptions are clean and clear.
I'll probably try more of your stories. Last edited by bottle; 09-12-2019 at 08:12 AM. |
09-12-2019 | #3 |
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Re: Free Story - The Hotel
Thank you! This was a very early story (I'm thinking about 5th or 6th) so I've refined a lot, in my opinion, since then.
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