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11-23-2015 | #1 |
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Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
I write female skin rip TFs, and I'm brainstorming the process for a futa werewolf TF. If you have read my stories or wanted to throw in an opinion because you're a fan of futa, any feedback would be appreciated. All of this is nongory, bloodless and erotic.
So the homologous anatomy is clit to penis and labia to scrotum, with ovaries and testes being the same organs but internal or external. The clit sits roughly in the same place as the base of a penis, and the labia is roughly in the same position as testicles. So in a skin rip futa TF, there are several ways I could perform the anatomical change before the labia are pulled apart. Here are some options. I'd love to know which you'd prefer, or if multiple sound appealing. 1. Mostly internal. In this, the external female genitals remain an intact skin layer. There's this buildup where her pussy mound swells, her inner beast's package bulging bigger and bigger beneath her horny female genitals, with a sensation of all this erotic pressure building inside her human pussy as her beast's half-erect penis grows down and wraps over her beast's tightly trapped balls. Her package becomes so big that her swollen human pussy is spread open a little, lips stretched apart, and in her vagina, a hint of bulging, veiny flesh strains to push out. On edge, she stops fighting the pressure and gives in to the urge to cum, and in one orgasmic explosion, her last vaginal orgasm, her massive cock and balls are forced through her ripping vagina, labia sundered as her huge balls tear them apart and tumble out from between her torn pussy lips, her foot long monster cock whipping free of her bursting human cunt, flesh ripping meatily up to the top of her pubic mound as her massive dick swings up to thick, full erection and she cums her first beast orgasm, jizzing massive sticky loads of semen all over whoever or whatever is in the way, even her own tits and face. 2. Clit to penis first, balls burst from between labia. In this, the clit tissue would burst from beneath her clitoral hood and expand, always fully erect, ripping the skin on her pubic mound apart as the base of her penis expands upward. At the same time, her labia would swell up with her huge balls hidden beneath them. Her cock would have the quality of thrusting out of her skin, like a snake pushing out of a hole. Then as it reaches the climax and has a final burst of growth to a full, monstrous erection, she either rips her labia open or more likely it tears on its own, and her beast testicles are pushed out of her bursting human pussy. Her girlcock starts cumming as soon as her genitals are completely freed. 3. Penis pushed out of vagina, followed by balls under labia and full labial rip. In this, the clit tissue is trapped and slides down, half-erect, until it reaches the path of least resistance and starts sliding out of her human vagina, angled down because of the flesh now trapping her new cock. She would look and feel as if her erect penis is being born out of her horny, swelling pussy, as if she was fucking her vagina while forcing out her cock to thrust out of her cunt. Her balls swell behind her labia, and when her cock and balls are too large to remain trapped, we have the labial rip, and her cock straightens, her balls burst from between her pussy lips, and boom, ejaculate on everyone. 4. Balls first, cock extends. I wrote this one already in a Dota story. The labial swelling is just huge testicles, but her nascent penis is broadening its glans behind her human clit and ready to grow. Her full testicles rip out of her labia and then her clitoral tissue expands and snakes out of her crotch, the penis emerging above her fully freed balls and getting girthier. Cumming at the end is optional since it's a less explosive process. 5. Penis grows up under belly skin, balls swelling beneath labia. I find this one least appealing, but it's still an option and it's still hot. Trapped, the penis grows up however far we want beneath her human hide, even up between her breasts if need be. The outline of her huge penis bulges visibly through the skin on her stomach / chest. Meanwhile, her labia swell up with her balls trapped beneath it. When fully grown, she either starts ripping from the tip of the penis on down to her labia, from which her testicles spill and she cums, or her balls burst out first and the rip goes up until her trapped, erect cock can fall into a normal position. Cum optional on that rip direction as it ends less explosively. Do you have any thoughts? Again, any feedback is appreciated. Last edited by norz; 11-24-2015 at 02:05 PM. |
11-25-2015 | #2 |
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Re: Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
I like option 3.
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11-25-2015 | #3 |
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11-25-2015 | #4 |
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Re: Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
I'm a fan of both 3 and 5.
5 is particularly interesting, I've never seen it done before. |
11-25-2015 | #5 |
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Re: Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
Yeah, a few people have commented on #5 being original, and I think the idea is hot--especially because it recalls elements of autofellatio or autopaizuri while combining it with skin rip--but it'll probably be saved for a particular story that focuses on that process. It has an atmosphere of being a poorly hidden erection, even with a totally naked lady, similar also to seeing a futa TF in exercise shorts where her dick grows down her leggings. Other characters can react to it.
It's looking like I'll probably alternate mostly between #1 and #3. #1 allows for an element of tension or surprise. She might not even fully understand what's happening until her new girlcock is whipping half-erect out of her crotch, sundered labia sliding up the sides of her heavy scrotum while her big balls tumble between her thighs, and she welcomes the relief of exposing her naked monster penis for the world to see. #3 on the flipside can be a surprise OR it can have an element of desire and control. She can deliberately force her monster cock to grow out of her vagina, one slimy thrusting inch at a time, feeling higher and higher plateaus of pleasure as she pushes her dick out longer and girthier, stretching open her pussy, fucking herself with her own beastcock. Other characters can react in terror or arousal as she becomes a big-dicked girl before their eyes. Her labia then become swollen and full. Her vagina is stretched to the absolute limit by her tremendous erection, straining to straighten. Then she can cum as she finally disgorges her ballsack out of her ripping human pussy lips, the last vaginal orgasm celebrating a woman's cock and balls unleashed. It has a lot of visible process, you know? I'm also glad nobody seems upset that her pussy is gone after these TFs. I prefer the full TF, and I hope others do as well. :3 Last edited by norz; 11-25-2015 at 10:35 PM. |
11-26-2015 | #6 |
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Re: Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
You know most people would call someone a Nerd because of their fascination with numbers, but here? Holy fuck.
In all seriousness? Do what inspires you and seems right or interesting. I swear that nobody has the expertise to tell you what is the "correct" way. |
11-27-2015 | #7 |
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Re: Wanted feedback on anatomy of a skin rip futa werewolf TF I'll be writing soon.
This sounds erotic in all but, when you say "werewolf futa", do you mean an actual wolf-like creature that is a woman with a dick?
Or, are you using it to illustrate a girl who just sprouts a huge package? I'm not interested in werewolves... nothing against furries or anything just not my bag.
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