10-29-2010 | #1 |
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Changing Lingerie (Offsite)
I've posted some stories throughout the forum, but I figured that some TG fans might not have seen this yet.
http://praedatorius.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2yfcec To describe it simply, a young man wanders a department store, waiting for the right moment to enter the lingerie department. However, he soon learns why he isn't allowed inside.
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10-30-2010 | #2 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
The transformation was handled really well in this one. I like this mythology that was set up here for it too. Very cool
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10-30-2010 | #3 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
Would like to see more, thought it was really well written.
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10-30-2010 | #4 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
Very nice!
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11-01-2010 | #5 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
This is very good. I would definately like to see more.
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11-01-2010 | #6 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
Transformation's pretty good, though I find a lot of elements here baffling.
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11-01-2010 | #7 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
Ooo! Baffling? Tell me more...
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11-02-2010 | #8 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
Forgive me if I missed some key elements here that retroactively invalidate my issues, as I'm in a college mood and as such very 'skimmy.'
One example, the boy at the beginning being led through this section/area/TF-field/whatever thinking nothing of what's happening to him, yet our prot later is fully aware and realizing the contrast between selves - didn't see any macguffin-hand-waving as to why this would or wouldn't occur.
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
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11-06-2010 | #10 |
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11-06-2010 | #11 |
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Re: Story: Changing Lingerie
i third that motion
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