11-02-2010 | #1 |
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Nice Stockings
If I don't toot my own horn, no one else will.
http://dragon-fangx.deviantart.com/a...ings-184808048 Guy TG to Stockings then chibify to show style.
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11-02-2010 | #2 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
It looked quite nice up until the second to last panel. You really didn't succeed on 'cute' it looked more scary/cuteish demon girl. Before those panels very nice.
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Re: Nice Stockings
Quote:
http://metanorn.kokidokom.net/wp-con...-stockings.jpg Not much I can do with just a sketch commission.
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11-02-2010 | #4 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
it looks more like chibification to me.... into a goth girl that is.....
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11-02-2010 | #5 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
OK, but you still did a pretty poor job compositing the images together into a single one. I think that and other issues might be why nobody's in a rush to toot your horn.
"But I work with what I'm given", I suppose.
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11-02-2010 | #6 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
Hmmm, well lets try again then. Took this to photoshop and touched it up a little. Hope its better.
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11-02-2010 | #7 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
Definitely improved.
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11-02-2010 | #8 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
You'd also do good to mix up your poses/angles/actions a bit.
Having every shot occur from the front with a mostly symmetrical figure A. Is slightly dull in and of itself (for reals.) B. Draws attention to flaws in symmetry if they exist (they will.) C. Opens comparisons to CasperTG's "sequences" (never a good thing.)
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11-02-2010 | #9 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
What do you have against Casper? At least he's trying to make something that makes people happy.
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11-03-2010 | #10 |
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Re: Nice Stockings
I have to say that i really enjoyed this. Your drawing style is certainly bold and original and looking through your DA page, you have tried lots of different subject matter, and if TG is reasonably new to you, I wouldn't have guessed.
I'm not saying it's perfect, but it's a good deal better than a lot of work i see.
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