Chubby Chews Feedback

[Nixemus]

Hi there,

Issue 2 of my comic; Chubby Chews has been released onto the GiantessClub site.

For those of you who have access, I was wondering if you had any feedback? It's the first comic series that I've written, and I'd love to get some feedback from the 'target audience' so to speak.

Thanks,
Nix.

[qzar9999]

Well, I don't currently have access (short of cash), but I do recall that I liked issue 1, though I felt it could've used a bit more growth. Still, it was a promising start, and I liked the concept.

[kuenbu]

The 2nd chapter threw a big curve ball and left lots of questions. Government conspiracy from candy? Why was she being targeted?

[shy]

Chubby Chews is perhaps my all time favorite from giantess club!

I'm really happy to see it continued.

She's gorgeous, just keep her growing (in detail) and keep her breathless about it all! My vote is that the hottest thing about any story is the process.

[qzar9999]

Originally Posted by kuenbu

Why was she being targeted?

As far as I can tell, probably because she'd be an ideal subject to test/experiment on with something like that candy; she has such a candy fixation that she'd keep eating it even if she noticed adverse effects.

[Nixemus]

Originally Posted by shy

Chubby Chews is perhaps my all time favorite from giantess club!

I'm really happy to see it continued.

She's gorgeous, just keep her growing (in detail) and keep her breathless about it all! My vote is that the hottest thing about any story is the process.

Glad to hear you like it! I think you'll like the next few issues

Originally Posted by qzar9999

As far as I can tell, probably because she'd be an ideal subject to test/experiment on with something like that candy; she has such a candy fixation that she'd keep eating it even if she noticed adverse effects.

Very astute

Thanks for the feedback guys! If you liked this one, then look out for Carnal Candle which should be released soon!

[2dollars]

This is basically a copy and paste from my review on the club. But here you go!

Well the story is getting weird.

First il start with the good. The size comparison and the masturbation scene was nice and that is about it. The rest of it was just odd distractions from the core of the comic.

For one the two bunnies were cute but completely unnecessary. It distracts from the hot gts action going one and is a wasted panel.

Then the old blind lady came and well, I was not turned on anymore. The story needs some work.

I'll end on a good note though. The giantess is indeed cute like the other viewers say.

[Nixemus]

Originally Posted by 2dollars

This is basically a copy and paste from my review on the club. But here you go!

Well the story is getting weird.

First il start with the good. The size comparison and the masturbation scene was nice and that is about it. The rest of it was just odd distractions from the core of the comic.

For one the two bunnies were cute but completely unnecessary. It distracts from the hot gts action going one and is a wasted panel.

Then the old blind lady came and well, I was not turned on anymore. The story needs some work.

I'll end on a good note though. The giantess is indeed cute like the other viewers say.

Interesting. So you say you'd rather have less story and more growth scenes?

When I write comics like this, I feel compelled to justify what's happening with the backstory and sometimes I suppose that takes over.

I'm planning a few one-shot comics which will feature just growth with little to no story though, keep an eye out for them. I'd love to see what you think of them.

[2dollars]

I'd say that you should find a better way to blend story and the growth. Sort of like a happy medium. I do this with character reactions and captions. You also have to remember that people on the gts club are paying for fetish fuel. Not so much for story. At least that is what I think.

I hope this helps