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Tieing a Knot Or two
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LOD's Poetry
I've tried writing a few poems in the past, but didn't post them here because they didn't include process. But my latest one is a shrinking POV poem so I figured why not.
Comments and criticisms are more than welcome!! Last edited by LOD; 03-14-2009 at 09:11 PM. |
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Re: LOD's Poetry
This is the first poem I've ever written.
Giantess
Giantess Beautiful, powerful Towering, crushing, loving My secret deepest desire Goddess |
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Re: LOD's Poetry
The Ultimate Dream
Striding through downtown, blocking out the sun. An epic Goddess larger than life, completely daunting. Sky-scraping buildings only reaching her knees, Pedestrians running from deadly footfalls. Staring upward Toward Heaven for guidance, only sealing their fate. Thundering laughter, she is quite amused. Life was quite large to her, now it's just a toy. As I watch her in the distance, no fear No other thoughts, just a need. We will meet, the ultimate guarantee. Inescapable beauty, destruction in her wake, The mixture blending so that none can escape. I approach my desire and let myself lose control. She's an unequaled dream towering over all. Her shadow to fall on my path, I beg please. I can feel her movements, miniature earthquakes. My dear sweet love will not leave me here waiting. She's closer than ever, then I open my eyes. Not wanting to wake now because it can't be, Couldn't be, yes sadly is just a dream. |
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Re: LOD's Poetry
Not sure what to name this one yet.
I repeat to myself that people can't shrink,
But denial is useless as I continue to sink. Slowly and steadily I lose more height. Pushing open the door takes all of my might. I enter her room and approach the bed, She tempts me with breasts now the size of my head. Picking me up, she admires her curse. She made sure our roles would be more than reversed. |
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03-15-2009
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Re: LOD's Poetry
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Re: LOD's Poetry
I know, the second one really sucks, the first one is way too short, but I sort of like the last. I think I did pretty good for just 2 hours of work.
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Re: LOD's Poetry
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