Excerpt from a game I'm working on (Alligator TF)

[popperock]

Hey everybody, I've been working on a Twine TF game where you play a hapless dope who is down on his luck, but gets a chance to make some big bucks for a mad scientist by turning pretty girls into animals for her research. Just thought I'd leave this part here, see if you guys like it or if my writing needs a little work. I'm also leaving the pic that inspired it, one by the lovely and talented Arkannes. Enjoy!

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She comes out of the bathroom wearing a hot leather outfit, and while you think it looks good on her, you're about to give her skin of a different kind.

She gasps as she sees the gun in your hand, and barely has time to get a word out before you pull the trigger. The dart pops as it sails out, sinking home on her right thigh. She yips in pain and yanks the dart out, then turns around to leave. She only gets as far as the front door, however, before she grunts and has to lean against it, her hips jutted out.

"What did you do to me?" she struggles out between clenched teeth, as you watch a pointed nub form right above her ass and start to tent out the leather pants.

She grunts again, and with a huge rip, the nub tears through the leather and expands out into a huge ridged tail, thick green scales covering the thing. You can see more scales starting to pop up and spread all over her body, up her back and down her arms. Alexis looks back in terror as she sees the monstrosity that has grown out her backside.

"Is that a... a-"
"Yes," you interrupt, "it's a tail."
"But why? What did I ever do to you?" she gasps out, her teeth now pointing into nasty incisors.
"It's nothing personal, just business," you say, "so don't give me any crocodile tears."
"Bastard." she says, still in obvious pain.



The pants finally give up the ghost and fall off down around her ankles, she kicks them to the side with rapidly changing toes, toes that are becoming pointed and sharp, the nails turning black and deadly, the little and ring piggies merging into one. You watch as the scales spread down her shrinking legs, the knees popping as they reshape and become thicker. Her hips crunch and fold forwards, sending her down to her hands, locking her into a four-legged stance, her tail rapidly widening over the last remnants of her butt cheeks. She continues to try to crawl away in pain, futilely reaching up at the door knob with arms that are steadily reducing in length and hands rapidly becoming clawed.

"I'm going to kill you!" she says. "You realize you're locked in here with one of the deadliest land animals on the planet, right?" she says, grimacing as the scales begin to grow over her neck.
"Yeah, but I'm not really worried." you say, climbing up onto the bed and sitting cross-legged on it. "I'm up here, you're down there, and you're going night-night once this is all over anyway. So just shut up and accept it. Besides, I think you're a much more interesting person now, don't ya think?"

Alexis huffs and groans as another wave of change passes through her, as the ridges from her tail spread up her back, each one popping as they grow out, shredding her top right off, green plates now covering her entire back. You see them now spread to her chest, breasts already gone, the scales turning yellow-white and spreading down her soft belly, turning it to hard armor, her torso bulging and reshaping and lengthening. Her hair falls out, drifting to the ground in front of her, she snatches it in her claws and yells in anger.

"My daddy's going to find you, and when he does, he's going to make you pay!" she says.

And with that, her face pushes out with a crunch, slowly, inch-by-inch into an alligator snout. She cries out one last time, her scream fading into a low growl. You watch with fascination as her nose turns upwards, folding into the growing muzzle, the nostrils being the only remnant as they rest on the tip of her snout. Her eyes turn reptilian, the pupils becoming vertical slits, the irises a primeval green. Alexis's ears fold back into the sides of her head, replaced with scaly hide. Her forehead crunches inwards as her spine cracks and readjusts to the back of her skull, the rest of the back of her head shrinking down into her neck, leaving only her eyes to slide off to each side and rest on top of her face.

And as you promised, the sedative effect of the serum kicks in, sending the highly dangerous animal, once a precocious college junior, into a slumber.

"See you later, gator." you say, dialing up Bridget on your scanner.

She pops up on the screen after a minute, looking harried. "Good news, Chris?"
"Yep, here, take a look." you say, and turn the camera over to the sleeping alligator on the floor.
"My god, what a fascinating transformation! I was not expecting something as large as a full grown alligator! Who was the subject?"
You turn the camera back to face Bridget. "That, was Alexis Copeland."
"Good, good." she says, a devilish smile crossing her face. "That'll teach him." she says under her breath.
"Teach who?" you say. She looks at you, eyes wide in panic.
"Uh, teach nobody. Heh, that was, uh, that was um, Latin! Yes, it was Latin. Thetlteahum africanus, the species that she is now." she rattles out.

Cuckoo, cuckoo...

"Anyway, don't worry about that, Chris."
"Um," you say, "The thought just occurred to me that there's no fucking way we're pulling a ten foot alligator out of a crowded dormitory without someone noticing."
"Like I said, don't worry, I have my ways. I would tell you how we'd do it, but I think that it would go over your simple little head." she nervously chuckles.
"You don't know how to do it either." you say.

She just looks at you bug-eyed for a few seconds.

"Hey, justrememberedleftanexperimentonthestovegottagobye !" she says, the screen flicking off.

Fuck it, it's not your problem anymore, though you have no doubt that Bridget will come up with something convoluted and wacky.