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[Snotling]

a new free story I'm working on... Please don't re post and ESPECIALLY DON'T MAKE A VIDEO OUT OF IT.

[Snotling]

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[Snotling]

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[DangerousDave]

Loved the shrinking/Growth combo

[Snotling]

Originally Posted by DangerousDave

Loved the shrinking/Growth combo

I bet you would!

[Clevens]

There is more, right? Like a part when she grows..since this is the growth section and everything.

[Snotling]

Originally Posted by Clevens

There is more, right? Like a part when she grows..since this is the growth section and everything.

the first girl (Cori) shrinks a foot and a half,
the second girl (Annabelle) grows a foot.

there are two hints to the fact:
1-the second change-sequence shows Annabelle growing
2-Its written in English "I'm growing" in a speech balloon.

The story will be continued and the "growing" will have more screen time than the "shrinking"... Just bear with me on this one.

[Case Scenario]

Originally Posted by Snotling

The story will be continued and the "growing" will have more screen time than the "shrinking"... Just bear with me on this one.

Well I hope you don't skimp on the shrinking. She's adorable. I enjoy these role reversal sort of scenarios, the big sister becoming the little sister and so forth... And I especially like that Cori is reacting realistically to her condition. Too many vignettes have everyone being either happy or just mildly annoyed with some extraordinary transformation. I wonder if they really will change back?

It makes a nice change of pace sometimes in these stories when there isn't an easy fix and not everybody winds up happy in the end, instead having to deal with drastically altered lifestyles. I always find that more engaging for some reason. Pat resolutions bug me.

By the way, Snotling (nice moniker by the way), have you considered revising your word balloons? The pictures seem much too nice for those utilitarian rectangles and dry text. I would suggest rounded balloons with thicker borders and thinner, curving tails, and perhaps a sturdier font, like Laffayette Comic Pro or Action Figure. It might be more pleasing to the eye.

[Snotling]

Originally Posted by Case Scenario

Well I hope you don't skimp on the shrinking. She's adorable. I enjoy these role reversal sort of scenarios, the big sister becoming the little sister and so forth... And I especially like that Cori is reacting realistically to her condition. Too many vignettes have everyone being either happy or just mildly annoyed with some extraordinary transformation. I wonder if they really will change back?

It makes a nice change of pace sometimes in these stories when there isn't an easy fix and not everybody winds up happy in the end, instead having to deal with drastically altered lifestyles. I always find that more engaging for some reason. Pat resolutions bug me.

By the way, Snotling (nice moniker by the way), have you considered revising your word balloons? The pictures seem much too nice for those utilitarian rectangles and dry text. I would suggest rounded balloons with thicker borders and thinner, curving tails, and perhaps a sturdier font, like Laffayette Comic Pro or Action Figure. It might be more pleasing to the eye.

so far, the balloons from PowerPoint, while they may not be the prettiest have a whole lot of advantages from a workflow perspective. they are also a big improvement from what I used in the past... also, round balloons waste more space and hide more of the picture than the rectangle ones. Especially when the story goes through a text heavy panel.

[Snotling]

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[Dragoon]

Originally Posted by Snotling

a new free story I'm working on... Please don't re post and ESPECIALLY DON'T MAKE A VIDEO OUT OF IT.

Nice work my friend and yeah the video thing is weird. Been seeing too much paid content series on dailymotion.

[Snotling]

Originally Posted by Dragoon

Nice work my friend and yeah the video thing is weird. Been seeing too much paid content series on dailymotion.

Piracy is one thing, but slide-show videos suck and my pictures deserve better.