Upcoming Descent - Shrink Fan Comics

[Valeyard Vince]

Down She Goes! - Upcoming Descent is out now!



When Renee accidentally interrupts her roommate Tyler tinkering with some strange chemistry, she has to deal with the fallout - meaning fall out of her clothes, as she shrinks too small to wear them! Will Tyler be able to fix this mess before Renee shrinks out of sight?



Synopsis: Renee comes home to find that her roommate, Tyler, has brought home a chemical compound from work. After coming into contact with the substance, Renee soon finds herself shrinking uncontrollably. An antidote is found to stop the process... but it is only temporary. Can a permanent cure be found, or will Renee become dependent on an antidote while she slowly dwindles away?

Release Date: October 1st, 2021
Written By: Renulen
Artwork By: Mei (Studio Arieta)
Tags: shrinking, shrunken woman, half-size, shrinking out of clothes, science

Issue Link: Upcoming Descent

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[AB23]

This was literally one of the weakest stories I've ever read from the site. There's no interaction, no putting the shrinking woman in her place, just her getting mad at her roommate who sheepishly looks away when she loses her clothes. The story line could've been done within one of those one shot comics that the site stopped posting a while back. I seriously can't believe I have to wait another month for another comic just because this story got put out first. Seriously though, we couldn't get a continuation of another storyline instead of this? Or this couldn't have been one of those ones you release during a slow period? If I have to pay $15 a month for sw comics I really expect more.

[Valeyard Vince]

Originally Posted by AB23

This was literally one of the weakest stories I've ever read from the site. There's no interaction, no putting the shrinking woman in her place, just her getting mad at her roommate who sheepishly looks away when she loses her clothes. The story line could've been done within one of those one shot comics that the site stopped posting a while back. I seriously can't believe I have to wait another month for another comic just because this story got put out first. Seriously though, we couldn't get a continuation of another storyline instead of this? Or this couldn't have been one of those ones you release during a slow period? If I have to pay $15 a month for sw comics I really expect more.

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We're sorry to learn that this title disappointed you and hope that our upcoming releases will be able to earn back whatever trust we lost this time around.

[Doll-Elf]

While the animation style was decent and the shrinking scenes are tasteful, overall the story heavily lacked content.

It felt very contrived in the beginning with a forced conflict of the whole kitchen being ripped apart to the point drawers were removed and plates were tossed back inside shelves.

We are to believe this all happened between when she left to go to work and come back?

I have lived with messy people in the past, and it's pretty bad. But this seems to be a whole other level of "Get it? Science dude make big mess for science"


The comic itself, with it's writing also felt extremely shallow with the characters being one dimensional.

The shrinking scenes had me excited for the comic, despite it being f/M, however the plot itself felt contrived for the scenes themselves rather than the story progressing into a more tangible understanding.

There is a difference with suspension of disbelief and this.



If I were to re-write the scene and it's plot, I could rather see a home lab instead of the kitchen being used with the experiment failing when Renee comes into the lab because Tyler typically gets so into what he's working on he forgets to eat. When she walks in, Tyler is napping on his desk and when she tries to wake him, he flails and the experiment falls, spilling onto her.

This keeps it still on the "technically Tyler's fault" while also having "Renee probably should have knocked" So the blame is dubious.

The sheer hatred Renee has for Tyler (Though justified without he literally destroyed a whole kitchen and tossed every single plate and cup into drawerless drawers) felt very out of place. Why would you have a roommate that you despise so much living with you not be kicked out before this point?


It's clearly implied that she can manage her apartment without him as it's implied early on that she's ready to kick him out.


Also, this is just a personal request, but can we get more pure F/f stuff?

Not F/M/f or F/f but also later M/f. Just some F/f

[swfind2002]

I hate to break it to you, but this will be coming out next month besides another comic.
https://www.shrinkfan.com/comics/Mag...ischief/c=148/

Shrunken Man and TG being incorporated? No interest from me. I certainly didn't join Shrink Fan for either theme.

[Prof_Sai]

Originally Posted by swfind2002

Shrunken Man and TG being incorporated? No interest from me. I certainly didn't join Shrink Fan for either theme.

You got your chocolate in my peanut butter!

Also me:. "You should have versions with all the penises censored." :P

[OhZone]

It wasn't bad. Some very nice SW process and I liked the style, and her expressions and reactions.

There just needs to be more of it.

So - until the next episode, my pleasures will be delayed.

Oh well.

[swfind2002]

Originally Posted by Prof_Sai

You got your chocolate in my peanut butter!

Also me:. "You should have versions with all the penises censored." :P

When Shrink Fan was originally started, it was promoted about being Shrinking/Shrunken Woman focused. TG and Shrunken Man aren't that. Giantess Fan already has plenty of Shrunken Man content.

[scidram]

Originally Posted by swfind2002

I hate to break it to you, but this will be coming out next month besides another comic.
https://www.shrinkfan.com/comics/Mag...ischief/c=148/

Shrunken Man and TG being incorporated? No interest from me. I certainly didn't join Shrink Fan for either theme.

"Magical Mischief" is a bonus comic. It's actually scheduled on their TransformFan site because the two characters appear to be transforming into pixies. They're also releasing it on ShrinkFan because there may be some crossover appeal--there is a shrunken woman in it. Since it's not one of their scheduled monthly releases, I look at its inclusion as a bonus. Great if I like that other stuff too, maybe some nice SW in it, but skippable if I don't like it.

[Tiedefender]

Is Shrink Fan not getting any updates to the gallery or comics?

[saren]

The gallery updates seem pretty dead on all their content.

But do we have to worry that there are only comic announcements for november on Shrink-Fan?

I know, shrinking hasnt the biggest fanbase but it would be a shame if it wasn't even enough for a monthly comic.

[Raso719]

Originally Posted by saren

The gallery updates seem pretty dead on all their content.

But do we have to worry that there are only comic announcements for november on Shrink-Fan?

I know, shrinking hasnt the biggest fanbase but it would be a shame if it wasn't even enough for a monthly comic.

Yeah I'm also kinda miffed about the sluggish gallery updates. I'm also a little nervous that that this month is only previewing one original and one bonus comic. There are other comics from other sister sites that might have SW appeal which could tie of fans if they need more time, but right now I'm finding it all a little sus.