Looking for feedback....

littlemissmolly · 05-12-2009

So I have been playing around again with manips outside of my normal bimbo world, but I need feedback from artists that have better understandings of photoshop and the like. So please, tell me what I need to improve on these are still works in progress. Sorry no Process yet.

K Thx

http://lilmissmolly.deviantart.com/

I have posted my work on Deviant Art but it is NSFW. I am posting them here too, but I will be updating mostly on DA.

thrandrall · 05-12-2009

Like the Bee one - it's definitely not the sort of TF you see very often unfortunately.

Don't have much experience with photomorphs myself, but you might be able to "smudge" or do a little more to "join" the legs to the bee thorax in a slightly less jarring way - and it would look even better.

Vengeance1701 · 05-13-2009

What Thrandrall said, Molly dolly.

littlemissmolly · 05-13-2009

So feedback was good from all the places so here is the series....

JustinThyme · 05-13-2009

Neato!! Very well done!!

Ladylike255 · 05-13-2009

That is so awesome! It looks so real! I bet a nicely done girl to cowgirl photo manipulation sequence (complete with udders) in a movie would be splendid!

ltmiroku · 05-13-2009

ok i do work with photoshop and if you want feedback here is some Good/Bad mind you

Good-
i loved the Cows coloring realy looked nice
The Bee Addon's also very nice
the way you put the parts with the girl moving it moved with them.

Bad-
the cow seems to have liquid going to the right Gravity gose down the liquid isn't going down also if its milk a little lighter white to see it better.

don't forget shading for the extra parts added make them look like they are there. "example on the bee antena 4th page of the lil comic"

last note coloring of the udders should match with the nipples to show there connected.
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other then the nit picking you did a great job at this the girl looks like she is part with them. and please forgive anything if i seemed harsh any you were looking for feedback and i do work with Photoshop as well so i figured i'd point out what i was able to notice off. ^.^

avatar2xl · 05-14-2009

*crosses his eyes and puts his palms out on both sides*

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!

also needs more blending between the animal and human parts, they look assembled.

05-12-2009	#2
thrandrall Chronicler of Dreams Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 1,602	Re: Looking for feedback.... Like the Bee one - it's definitely not the sort of TF you see very often unfortunately. Don't have much experience with photomorphs myself, but you might be able to "smudge" or do a little more to "join" the legs to the bee thorax in a slightly less jarring way - and it would look even better. __________________ Visit the Transformation Repository! Donate to support an artist!

05-13-2009	#3
Vengeance1701 Modest Moderator Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,998	Re: Looking for feedback.... What Thrandrall said, Molly dolly. __________________ Meh. Cranky and old.

05-13-2009	#5
JustinThyme Lurker Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 28	Re: Looking for feedback.... Neato!! Very well done!!

05-13-2009	#6
Ladylike255 Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Gremlin City Posts: 420	Re: Looking for feedback.... That is so awesome! It looks so real! I bet a nicely done girl to cowgirl photo manipulation sequence (complete with udders) in a movie would be splendid!

05-13-2009	#7
ltmiroku Process Master Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 564	Re: Looking for feedback.... ok i do work with photoshop and if you want feedback here is some Good/Bad mind you Good- i loved the Cows coloring realy looked nice The Bee Addon's also very nice the way you put the parts with the girl moving it moved with them. Bad- the cow seems to have liquid going to the right Gravity gose down the liquid isn't going down also if its milk a little lighter white to see it better. don't forget shading for the extra parts added make them look like they are there. "example on the bee antena 4th page of the lil comic" last note coloring of the udders should match with the nipples to show there connected. --------------------------- other then the nit picking you did a great job at this the girl looks like she is part with them. and please forgive anything if i seemed harsh any you were looking for feedback and i do work with Photoshop as well so i figured i'd point out what i was able to notice off. ^.^

05-14-2009	#8
avatar2xl Been there, done that. Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 438	Re: Looking for feedback.... crosses his eyes and puts his palms out on both sides BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! also needs more blending between the animal and human parts, they look assembled. __________________ Painkiller by Judas priest is now playing in your head.