Course of the Heart (Incomplete)

Magical_TG · 08-16-2008

By: Magical_TG

Introduction: After a coming out gone wrong, Lilia is forced move out. Her brother stumbles upon something she left behind, a spell. Eventually, curiosity overwhelms and he begins to gather the ingredients. What does one have to lose? However when circumstances change, our hero is forced to choose between pursuing his dreams or the girl of his dreams.

The title of my short story is called Course of the Heart. As of now it is done but I'll be editing it some more before submitting it to Doc's Lab. I put it in two formats if you don't have Word. Enjoy!

Cadell · 08-16-2008

Not bad so far. Keep up the good work.

Magical_TG · 08-16-2008

Really? Good because I was holding back. Here's Chapter 2.

EDIT: Forgot about the summary.

Summary: After encountering his own creation; our hero begins his changes. Will he stick with his heart or be defeated by the new challenges that await him/her. And what are these mysterious dreams about a diner? What do they mean?

Reif · 08-17-2008

Thats actually pretty good. The main character atleast is well defined and motivated. So far you have a great start to a "story" style piece of fiction (as opposed to the one-off pieces). You might want to read Bek de Corbin's work (should be linked in the favorite fiction thread) for other excellent examples of "story" style fiction. Looking forward to chapter 3.

Cadell · 08-17-2008

Actual characters are a plus. Transformation authors (that I have read) jump into things a little too quickly for my taste. As a result their characters seem flat. Kudos.

Kamikaze_Wtrmln · 08-18-2008

Great story so far, can't wait to read more.

comatose · 08-19-2008

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It was great how he wasn't actually turned into a girl just yet, but actually had the world bend to it until he would be transformed.

Magical_TG · 08-20-2008

Ah, it's been a few days huh? I've been busy with life and all. Got to have that morning bowl of inspiration before picking up a pen right? Or in this case a keyboard! Here's chapter 3. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

No intro this time. Really tired. Need bed

frice2000 · 08-20-2008

Very good read. Enjoying it quite a bit and wondering if his "sister" was always his sister. Hehe...Looking forward to the next installment.

jariah · 08-21-2008

wow an engaging piece of tg literature?

Fantastic bravo

Magical_TG · 08-22-2008

The next chapter is going to take a bit longer. I'm trying to develop Jenny's character as the main character is moving on to his meeting with her. They say patience is a virtue.

Meanwhile, why not look at my past work(s)?

http://doc.erazor-zone.de/forum/view...php?f=20&t=982

This got accepted recently, it's TG and gradual, however it involves a bit of 'anthro-cat' morphing. Not too much to distract from the actual TG, anyway, enjoy!

frice2000 · 08-22-2008

Oh that story was you? Liked that immensely as well and had already read it :P. Good job

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08-16-2008	#2
Cadell Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 679	Re: Untitled Fiction Not bad so far. Keep up the good work. __________________ This is a signature.

08-17-2008	#4
Reif Frequent Poster Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 223	Re: Untitled Fiction Thats actually pretty good. The main character atleast is well defined and motivated. So far you have a great start to a "story" style piece of fiction (as opposed to the one-off pieces). You might want to read Bek de Corbin's work (should be linked in the favorite fiction thread) for other excellent examples of "story" style fiction. Looking forward to chapter 3.

08-17-2008	#5
Cadell Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 679	Re: Untitled Fiction Actual characters are a plus. Transformation authors (that I have read) jump into things a little too quickly for my taste. As a result their characters seem flat. Kudos. __________________ This is a signature.

08-18-2008	#6
Kamikaze_Wtrmln Process Fan Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 53	Re: Untitled Fiction Great story so far, can't wait to read more. __________________

08-19-2008	#7
comatose Rising Interest Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 15	Re: Untitled Fiction I'm looking forward to the next chapter. It was great how he wasn't actually turned into a girl just yet, but actually had the world bend to it until he would be transformed.

08-20-2008	#9
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Untitled Fiction Very good read. Enjoying it quite a bit and wondering if his "sister" was always his sister. Hehe...Looking forward to the next installment.

08-21-2008	#10
jariah Lurker Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 18	Re: Untitled Fiction wow an engaging piece of tg literature? Fantastic bravo

08-22-2008	#11
Magical_TG TG Author Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 43	Re: Untitled Fiction The next chapter is going to take a bit longer. I'm trying to develop Jenny's character as the main character is moving on to his meeting with her. They say patience is a virtue. Meanwhile, why not look at my past work(s)? http://doc.erazor-zone.de/forum/view...php?f=20&t=982 This got accepted recently, it's TG and gradual, however it involves a bit of 'anthro-cat' morphing. Not too much to distract from the actual TG, anyway, enjoy!

08-22-2008	#12
frice2000 "My way of thanking you" Join Date: Jan 2006 Posts: 401	Re: Untitled Fiction Oh that story was you? Liked that immensely as well and had already read it :P. Good job .