Needing proof reader for Jekyll and Hyde TG Novella 'Rebecca'

[mjr]

Hello everyone, my first post evers. I'm currently reaching the conclusion for my first full story and would like to get it right. As it's my first I have little confidence of how I carried it out. What we are looking at is an Jekyll and Hyde continuation with an accidental gender change. Though there is a transformation involved and quite a graphic one, I've tried to build up a lot of character depth, tension, inpending doom and metaphysics along the way. I would like to start posting the chapters of this story from mid to late August and move onto the artwork which I'm planning to include. I will be very happy to hear back from you guys. MjR

[Jake]

You can send me a link. I love these kinds of stories.

[bigguy123]

I will proof read it for you

[Jake]

Where is it?

[mjr]

Hello I sent you a private message.

[mjr]

Originally Posted by Jake

Where is it?

I sent you a private message with a question. I was waiting for a response.

[pie-guardian]

count me in :P

[Jake]

Are you alive?

[mjr]

Yes after a week and half of having no internet, I've started publishing my work on DA first. I had to edit myself in the end.

First Chapter Test And Results.

http://fav.me/de3giqy

Second Chapter Edward's Day

http://fav.me/de3msie

Third Chapter The Masked Female

http://fav.me/de3otcp

[Jimbo]

congrats, its a big risk putting your stuff out there for others to sample. I wish you well in your future endeavours

[mjr]

Yes I had to do it by text to speech the links that I have posted are the finished published chapters.

Originally Posted by Jimbo

congrats, its a big risk putting your stuff out there for others to sample. I wish you well in your future endeavours