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07-22-2017 | #1 |
AKA Sister Hyde
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A Nymph Called Agnes
A Scotland-set sequence I commissioned from Erismanor. If you like busty redheads, this will be right up your alley.
http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/...gnes-690783177 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph02-690783638 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph03-690783653 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph04-690783667 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph05-690783684 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph06-690783701 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph07-690783716 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph08-690783727 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph09-690783736 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph10-690783748 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph11-690783765 http://erismanor.deviantart.com/art/Nymph12-690783776 |
07-22-2017 | #2 |
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
I liked it....only critique I have is that because of the setup of the castle plus the water... that the victim and the nymph don't look like they have any relation to each other. The victim's background is all castle. The nymph's background is all natural.
That make any sense to anybody but me?
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AKA Sister Hyde
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
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07-23-2017 | #4 |
Shut the Buck up
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
I was more caught up on the borderline racist accents to be honest.
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07-23-2017 | #5 |
AKA Sister Hyde
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07-23-2017 | #6 | |
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
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These are simple observations and remarks on the work you commissioned and shared. if you cant handle casual feedback... why do you even bother..? |
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07-23-2017 | #7 |
Shut the Buck up
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
I mean, don't get me wrong, the transformation itself is great, but being Scottish myself, the accent is pretty bad. If you need a "translation" in the future, feel free to hit me up.
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07-24-2017 | #8 |
Akibakei
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
Thought you was a Geordie
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07-24-2017 | #9 |
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
eh not into chubby girls
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07-29-2017 | #10 |
AKA Sister Hyde
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08-04-2017 | #11 |
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
I'm glad the sequence doesn't linger too long over the transformation, yet still gives some process. I mean, I like detailed TFs and TGs, but I don't need 4 pages just devoted to his butt getting rounder. If the change takes too long, it takes over the story being told. Some people are ok with that, but I'm not; the transformation should serve the story, not the other way around.
I'm a bit puzzled over the reason for the transformation, though. Reinterpreting myths and such is fine - note how dragons have evolved over the years in popular fiction from destructive, greedy beasts the size of buildings to more reasonably-sized intelligent, even friendly creatures - but this seems a bit much. The whole point of nymphs is that they're beautiful womanlike beings who seduce men and have sex with them. Kind of like nondemonic succubi, I suppose. Making it so any man who gets aroused by one becomes one pretty much negates their entire role in the mythological world. In short, I would have preferred a different reason for the change. He falls in her bathing spring as he spies on her. She gives him a drink of special nectar. He says something that could be interpreted as asking for it (although he probably didn't mean it that way), or perhaps insults her somehow. Something. Not just gazing on her and getting aroused. It's reasonably well done for the scenario as portrayed, however. Short, to the point, good TG. |
07-24-2017 | #12 |
Shut the Buck up
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Re: A Nymph Called Agnes
Whai-aye man!
Nah, I'm north of the border |
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